for A Hot Mess6/16/2016 c41 
1Du
Oh wow. I seriously, SERIOUSLY love your writing. This story was so good. Real, raw. I don't even know. But I am a fan. Jaimie was a really strong female character (like all your female leads are). Jax was sweet and I love how he wasn't a 2D character, with a difficult background and issues everywhere. How you included Dom and Gary was just so... It made the story seem even more real life. I was NOT expecting Yelena's pregnancy, but I liked how you worked it in. And the this ending, it was so perfect, Dom's interruption included. And the epilogue closed the story so well. Again, thank you for writing such wonderful stories, they are seriously underrated. Wish you the best, can't wait to keep reading more from you!
1DuOh wow. I seriously, SERIOUSLY love your writing. This story was so good. Real, raw. I don't even know. But I am a fan. Jaimie was a really strong female character (like all your female leads are). Jax was sweet and I love how he wasn't a 2D character, with a difficult background and issues everywhere. How you included Dom and Gary was just so... It made the story seem even more real life. I was NOT expecting Yelena's pregnancy, but I liked how you worked it in. And the this ending, it was so perfect, Dom's interruption included. And the epilogue closed the story so well. Again, thank you for writing such wonderful stories, they are seriously underrated. Wish you the best, can't wait to keep reading more from you!
5/22/2015 c41 Jo
Such a good story. You write very well. You engage the reader and make them feel invested in the outcome.
Such a good story. You write very well. You engage the reader and make them feel invested in the outcome.
4/24/2015 c41 Guest
i finished your story in a matter of hours. Once i started reading it I just couldn't stop. I don't understand why your it has got such less reviews. This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. It's probably the most under reviewed story. Loved your stories, loved the characters, brilliant work
i finished your story in a matter of hours. Once i started reading it I just couldn't stop. I don't understand why your it has got such less reviews. This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. It's probably the most under reviewed story. Loved your stories, loved the characters, brilliant work
10/27/2014 c41 Elsa Louise Fehr
This story was so ironic for me. I'm from Toronto, my name is Elaine, I have a niece named Jamie, I have an Uncle Gary and I knew a Steve in high school.
It's like it was ripped from my life a bit. lol
This story was so ironic for me. I'm from Toronto, my name is Elaine, I have a niece named Jamie, I have an Uncle Gary and I knew a Steve in high school.
It's like it was ripped from my life a bit. lol
5/31/2014 c41 Guest
I feel the need to tell you 'This is an amazing story.' I read a lot of posts on this site and unfortunately many of them seem to be written by a lot of 15-16 yr. olds. Too many grammatical errors and they seem to lose their way during the story, making them virtually unreadable. So, I felt the need to thank you for deciding to include this site in your circle of publishing. I honestly can't wait to read more of your works. Please don't be shy about posting more of your stories.
Thank you!
Daydrmr
I feel the need to tell you 'This is an amazing story.' I read a lot of posts on this site and unfortunately many of them seem to be written by a lot of 15-16 yr. olds. Too many grammatical errors and they seem to lose their way during the story, making them virtually unreadable. So, I felt the need to thank you for deciding to include this site in your circle of publishing. I honestly can't wait to read more of your works. Please don't be shy about posting more of your stories.
Thank you!
Daydrmr
2/1/2014 c40 Guest
Beautiful story with a happy forward to the for taking us on this entertaining journey.
Beautiful story with a happy forward to the for taking us on this entertaining journey.
1/31/2014 c39 Guest
AAAHH... thank u for uploading!you rock
AAAHH... thank u for uploading!you rock
1/29/2014 c39 Guest
I have been waiting impatiently for updates to this story, which I really really is a love story. Looking forward to the two of them finally meeting up and getting together.
I have been waiting impatiently for updates to this story, which I really really is a love story. Looking forward to the two of them finally meeting up and getting together.
1/26/2014 c38 Guest
OMG!U UPLOADED!THANK U SO MUCH! please continue this story u awesome person!
OMG!U UPLOADED!THANK U SO MUCH! please continue this story u awesome person!
1/26/2014 c38 Guest
I love this story and hope that Jax and Jaimie will finally get together and raise Nate.
I love this story and hope that Jax and Jaimie will finally get together and raise Nate.
1/25/2014 c1 Guest
Thank u for the new chapter! please continue to update this wonderful story of yours..
update soon please
Thank u for the new chapter! please continue to update this wonderful story of yours..
update soon please
1/21/2014 c37 the unknown anon
awesome as always! it was a little fast paced i wished you slowed down a little and explained more on jax's part
awesome as always! it was a little fast paced i wished you slowed down a little and explained more on jax's part
1/21/2014 c37 3Megsi
Wow, that was a messed up situation in the last chapter but you managed to make it work.
Yelena has found someone to straighten her out (permanently I hope, I kinda like her) and Jax gets the best of both worlds, he gets a kid and Jaimie (hopefully!) and this way she won't have reservations over not being able to give him any because he already has a son.
Woo!
I love your story :)
3MegsiWow, that was a messed up situation in the last chapter but you managed to make it work.
Yelena has found someone to straighten her out (permanently I hope, I kinda like her) and Jax gets the best of both worlds, he gets a kid and Jaimie (hopefully!) and this way she won't have reservations over not being able to give him any because he already has a son.
Woo!
I love your story :)
1/20/2014 c37 Guest
Oh no you have piqued my interest and I am wondering how you will make everything alright between Jaimie and Jax.
Oh no you have piqued my interest and I am wondering how you will make everything alright between Jaimie and Jax.