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3Megsi
Woo!
I went away for a while and was so excited when I checked my emails and saw you'd updated a whole bunch of times!
I love this, even if Jaimie and Jax are a bit fucked up at the moment. They have a really nice relationship, for the most part, and what seems like a natural chemistry.
I really want to know who the writer is, I feel like maybe it's a setup by Dom and he's sending the two of them there to sort themselves out. And Gary and Dom... How cute! I was hoping that would happen.
Can't wait for your next update.
3MegsiWoo!
I went away for a while and was so excited when I checked my emails and saw you'd updated a whole bunch of times!
I love this, even if Jaimie and Jax are a bit fucked up at the moment. They have a really nice relationship, for the most part, and what seems like a natural chemistry.
I really want to know who the writer is, I feel like maybe it's a setup by Dom and he's sending the two of them there to sort themselves out. And Gary and Dom... How cute! I was hoping that would happen.
Can't wait for your next update.
12/30/2013 c26 Jester79
Wow - a lot of confessing going on in that book. Sounds like Jaimie is going to do some confessing as well.
Wow - a lot of confessing going on in that book. Sounds like Jaimie is going to do some confessing as well.
12/29/2013 c24 Alexis Grace
It is unthinkable that you have only 15 comments for this story it is absolutely amazing! I look forward to your updates and love everything about this book! I do think however that the last two chapters would possibly go together if they were just one!
I am absolutely In love with your characters and how real they seem! Please update soon :)
Alexis
It is unthinkable that you have only 15 comments for this story it is absolutely amazing! I look forward to your updates and love everything about this book! I do think however that the last two chapters would possibly go together if they were just one!
I am absolutely In love with your characters and how real they seem! Please update soon :)
Alexis
12/28/2013 c23 the unknown anon
I've just finished reading this. I followed your account a long time ago since you finished 'Offshore' and I never noticed this story until I got the email saying that you updated this 'A Hot Mess'. I checked it and I don't regret a thing! I love this story! I'm in love with Jaimie! I'm in love with Jaimie and Jackson together!
Hope you could update more
I've just finished reading this. I followed your account a long time ago since you finished 'Offshore' and I never noticed this story until I got the email saying that you updated this 'A Hot Mess'. I checked it and I don't regret a thing! I love this story! I'm in love with Jaimie! I'm in love with Jaimie and Jackson together!
Hope you could update more
10/22/2013 c20 Jester79
Lulu's hilarious - everyone needs one of her in their family. It's funny he didn't address the "girlfriend" but, the "complete strangers" in her statement.
Lulu's hilarious - everyone needs one of her in their family. It's funny he didn't address the "girlfriend" but, the "complete strangers" in her statement.
10/6/2013 c19 1HappilyEverAfter29
It was practically perfect! I probably found 2 or 3 mistakes out of the whole thing? And it is a wonderful story line! I loved it! Please update soon!
1HappilyEverAfter29It was practically perfect! I probably found 2 or 3 mistakes out of the whole thing? And it is a wonderful story line! I loved it! Please update soon!