for The Quarterback Dilemma1/25/2014 c1 
2Cyanna Grace
Fowl should be foul (fowl hen, foul bad/nasty). I love this story, it made me laugh and it flows really well. It's fluffy and cute but the emotions are all real and tangible and believable.
2Cyanna GraceFowl should be foul (fowl hen, foul bad/nasty). I love this story, it made me laugh and it flows really well. It's fluffy and cute but the emotions are all real and tangible and believable.
1/16/2014 c1 sekai
One of the most cutest oneshot I've read!
One of the most cutest oneshot I've read!
10/27/2013 c1 bbnt
That was a really cute one shot .
That was a really cute one shot .
9/26/2013 c1 69Shadowswept
This was a perfect short story! I love your style of writing. You kept a consistent tone through the entire piece, which is not easy to do. Emily was a completely realized character, and that doesn't always happen even in a novel. She absolutely came alive on the page for me. This story was funny and sexy. I enjoyed it very much.
69ShadowsweptThis was a perfect short story! I love your style of writing. You kept a consistent tone through the entire piece, which is not easy to do. Emily was a completely realized character, and that doesn't always happen even in a novel. She absolutely came alive on the page for me. This story was funny and sexy. I enjoyed it very much.
4/21/2013 c1 3Nouveaux
I came upon this story from one of your others and I have to say I really like your first-person narrative! The sarcastic, teenage tone was captured perfectly and there was just something so interesting about the story.
3NouveauxI came upon this story from one of your others and I have to say I really like your first-person narrative! The sarcastic, teenage tone was captured perfectly and there was just something so interesting about the story.
2/16/2013 c1 gigi
Hi:)
I've read your pirate story already and I have to say that this is even better:)
It has some nice humor without feeling forced :)
Hi:)
I've read your pirate story already and I have to say that this is even better:)
It has some nice humor without feeling forced :)
2/6/2013 c1 Guest
Awee, I really enjoyed your short story. It was the perfect length, though I do wish there was more detail ] . But overall it was really refreshing and you have great potential of becoming a brillant writer. Thank you )
Awee, I really enjoyed your short story. It was the perfect length, though I do wish there was more detail ] . But overall it was really refreshing and you have great potential of becoming a brillant writer. Thank you )
1/27/2013 c1 Nadia
This was terrific! It was funny and had a happy surprise at the end.
This was terrific! It was funny and had a happy surprise at the end.