for The Mending of a Heart7/3/2013 c26 
1nove1198
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAY AND TRENT ARE GOING TO HAVE A BABY! Right? Right? That MUST be the surprise for Barbara. D
Was the new thing about the new potential pack members Gale found? Perhaps about the alpha who's purposefully changing people? Could Gale be a mate for Logan? My brain is spinning right now. )
I have so loved this story. I can hardly wait for Abeline's and Braiden's. )
1nove1198AHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAY AND TRENT ARE GOING TO HAVE A BABY! Right? Right? That MUST be the surprise for Barbara. D
Was the new thing about the new potential pack members Gale found? Perhaps about the alpha who's purposefully changing people? Could Gale be a mate for Logan? My brain is spinning right now. )
I have so loved this story. I can hardly wait for Abeline's and Braiden's. )
7/2/2013 c25 3TheClosetWriter16
I don't know what you threw in... Braiden can walk again... he's leaving... and the other guy...
Ahaha amazing chapter! :D Trent can't go! ! :(
3TheClosetWriter16I don't know what you threw in... Braiden can walk again... he's leaving... and the other guy...
Ahaha amazing chapter! :D Trent can't go! ! :(
7/1/2013 c24 19Alaeryel
NO BLOODY FUCKING WAY! HELL AND DAMNATION A THOUSAND TIMES OVER! I can see that HELL has just begun BUT like you said earlier-there is a WAY out of this and DAMN IF I WON'T BE BOUNCING off walls for it to happen! GREAT AND AMAZING JOB HERE!
19AlaeryelNO BLOODY FUCKING WAY! HELL AND DAMNATION A THOUSAND TIMES OVER! I can see that HELL has just begun BUT like you said earlier-there is a WAY out of this and DAMN IF I WON'T BE BOUNCING off walls for it to happen! GREAT AND AMAZING JOB HERE!
7/1/2013 c23 Alaeryel
OMG AND DAMN IT TA HELL-the crap has hit the fan so to speak! Logan blames Trent for everything and that doesn't mean I think Logan is to blame for what happened but what a messy tangled web you have spun now-I LOVE IT! Well now that everything is out in the open maybe things can start smoothing out but not quite this soon! You just BLOW MY MIND!
OMG AND DAMN IT TA HELL-the crap has hit the fan so to speak! Logan blames Trent for everything and that doesn't mean I think Logan is to blame for what happened but what a messy tangled web you have spun now-I LOVE IT! Well now that everything is out in the open maybe things can start smoothing out but not quite this soon! You just BLOW MY MIND!
7/1/2013 c22 Alaeryel
Well one major question was answered and I do not regret Bruno dying at all WHAT I DO REGRET is that it had to be Trent that killed him! I am so PROUD of how Trent controlled his wolf when the wolf took over but I cried my eyes out for May! Is Dez and Riven actually mates or were they just friends-I lean towards them being mates myself! SHOOT ME, STUFF ME and THROW ME IN A CORNER GIRL!
Well one major question was answered and I do not regret Bruno dying at all WHAT I DO REGRET is that it had to be Trent that killed him! I am so PROUD of how Trent controlled his wolf when the wolf took over but I cried my eyes out for May! Is Dez and Riven actually mates or were they just friends-I lean towards them being mates myself! SHOOT ME, STUFF ME and THROW ME IN A CORNER GIRL!
7/1/2013 c21 Alaeryel
My heart leapt at the fact that Ranger finally felt Abeline and her pain-serves that twit right-LOL! I can't even fathom tho when you said he blurred I was thinking maybe atleast half vampire-I have always read when they move it is like a blur of motions-anyway I will just have to sit and bide my time until you decide to show us what he is! I can't blame May for being apprehensive of Trent and I think maybe 'a little' time would be good BUT she also should know he would never hurt her! I also understand where Smith is coming from-he is concerned for his daughter and doesn't want her to die with Trent. THANK GOD YOU DON'T DO UNHAPPY ENDINGS-ESPECIALLY with these two characters-hell any of these characters-they have come to mean a lot to me!
My heart leapt at the fact that Ranger finally felt Abeline and her pain-serves that twit right-LOL! I can't even fathom tho when you said he blurred I was thinking maybe atleast half vampire-I have always read when they move it is like a blur of motions-anyway I will just have to sit and bide my time until you decide to show us what he is! I can't blame May for being apprehensive of Trent and I think maybe 'a little' time would be good BUT she also should know he would never hurt her! I also understand where Smith is coming from-he is concerned for his daughter and doesn't want her to die with Trent. THANK GOD YOU DON'T DO UNHAPPY ENDINGS-ESPECIALLY with these two characters-hell any of these characters-they have come to mean a lot to me!
7/1/2013 c20 Alaeryel
Please just shoot me-get this death done and over with-PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE! Well I didn't see that coming with Ranger and cannot wait to see what he is exactly and I want to see Dez's throat taken out about now! I also cannot wait to see May's reaction to Trent's admission BUT what really got me was when Smith walked into the house and said 'Trent, you are a dead man'-PRICELESS and died laughing! Someone needs to castrate Roy and let him live enough to shove his 'balls' down his throat! DAMN GIRL THIS TENSION KEEPS BUILDING THE MORE I READ!
Please just shoot me-get this death done and over with-PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE! Well I didn't see that coming with Ranger and cannot wait to see what he is exactly and I want to see Dez's throat taken out about now! I also cannot wait to see May's reaction to Trent's admission BUT what really got me was when Smith walked into the house and said 'Trent, you are a dead man'-PRICELESS and died laughing! Someone needs to castrate Roy and let him live enough to shove his 'balls' down his throat! DAMN GIRL THIS TENSION KEEPS BUILDING THE MORE I READ!
7/1/2013 c19 Alaeryel
Well, I was going to ask what was going on with Dez and Riven but complicated works until you decide to write it in-if you do anyway! This was BEYOND INTENSE both sexually and angtsy with Roy and Abeline and OH MY BLOODY GOD-Trent and May-OOOOO-I NEED A COLD SHOWER NOW! DAMN BLOODY BRILLIANT my FRIEND! YOU ARE GOING TO MAKE IT BIG GIRL if these two stories are anything to tell from-you have CAPTURED me MIND, HEART AND SOUL!
Well, I was going to ask what was going on with Dez and Riven but complicated works until you decide to write it in-if you do anyway! This was BEYOND INTENSE both sexually and angtsy with Roy and Abeline and OH MY BLOODY GOD-Trent and May-OOOOO-I NEED A COLD SHOWER NOW! DAMN BLOODY BRILLIANT my FRIEND! YOU ARE GOING TO MAKE IT BIG GIRL if these two stories are anything to tell from-you have CAPTURED me MIND, HEART AND SOUL!
7/1/2013 c18 Alaeryel
What an ABSOLUTELY INTENSE and AMAZING CHAPTER! I want Roy's head on a silver platter and fed to wild boars! Ranger needs his ass kicked and balls stomped about now the stupid 'human'. YAY-Trent is going to finally claim May-DAMN WELL ABOUT TIME-LOL! My guts are tied up in knots and churling all around-FANTASTIC GIRL!
What an ABSOLUTELY INTENSE and AMAZING CHAPTER! I want Roy's head on a silver platter and fed to wild boars! Ranger needs his ass kicked and balls stomped about now the stupid 'human'. YAY-Trent is going to finally claim May-DAMN WELL ABOUT TIME-LOL! My guts are tied up in knots and churling all around-FANTASTIC GIRL!
7/1/2013 c17 Alaeryel
DAMN DAMN DAMN AND BLOODY FU** - I want to kill Roy myself now and I know Trent is already in enough trouble BUT I hope he does kill this other bastard! May is his and this time he has every right to protect her! I LOOOOOOVED how Barbara put that little BITCH in her place and HOLY HELL I AM MESMERIZED! I am also bouncing all over dying to know more so off I go-YOU ARE DA BOMB as my oldest son says!
DAMN DAMN DAMN AND BLOODY FU** - I want to kill Roy myself now and I know Trent is already in enough trouble BUT I hope he does kill this other bastard! May is his and this time he has every right to protect her! I LOOOOOOVED how Barbara put that little BITCH in her place and HOLY HELL I AM MESMERIZED! I am also bouncing all over dying to know more so off I go-YOU ARE DA BOMB as my oldest son says!
7/1/2013 c16 Alaeryel
OH BLOODY HELL -I am glad Trent told May and got most of it off his chest! I want to knock Baylor on the head and ship him to another country to protect Trent and Riven's pack! Abeline needs to back off a few and deal with her 'mate'! LOL! Although I do LOVE how she is protective of her sister-kudos for that! OMG Ranger used to live among werewolves? What the HELL happened to make him start hunting them? We are on one wild, adventurous ride here with this story and now I am off to the next chapter-DYING to find out more!
OH BLOODY HELL -I am glad Trent told May and got most of it off his chest! I want to knock Baylor on the head and ship him to another country to protect Trent and Riven's pack! Abeline needs to back off a few and deal with her 'mate'! LOL! Although I do LOVE how she is protective of her sister-kudos for that! OMG Ranger used to live among werewolves? What the HELL happened to make him start hunting them? We are on one wild, adventurous ride here with this story and now I am off to the next chapter-DYING to find out more!
7/1/2013 c24 1WannaFlyFree4ever
I still love this story so much it great but i cant wait to hear ablines story
1WannaFlyFree4everI still love this story so much it great but i cant wait to hear ablines story