for Senpai Noticed Me2/5/2013 c1 Guest
Bravo. It might feel a little incomplete to others due to the lack of specification on Naomi's background, but I feel that this is a great one-shot with little to fix - it makes you feel like you're simply glimpsing by a stage of their relationship, no particular need to dive too deep into the characters and settings, but a potential White Day sequel is always something to anticipate for.
I wonder, is it senpai or sempai? (the curse of translations)
Bravo. It might feel a little incomplete to others due to the lack of specification on Naomi's background, but I feel that this is a great one-shot with little to fix - it makes you feel like you're simply glimpsing by a stage of their relationship, no particular need to dive too deep into the characters and settings, but a potential White Day sequel is always something to anticipate for.
I wonder, is it senpai or sempai? (the curse of translations)
2/5/2013 c1 Felrain
*Fangirl screams even though I rarely do* This was adorable in a sense, I myself like manga and despite this being more written then anything it was still very good and full of visuals. Well done!
*Fangirl screams even though I rarely do* This was adorable in a sense, I myself like manga and despite this being more written then anything it was still very good and full of visuals. Well done!