for Poison12/27/2021 c1 heelenah
I like with the story. It's really great, so why you not try to join a writing contest? You should check it first. i'll give you the link:
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I like with the story. It's really great, so why you not try to join a writing contest? You should check it first. i'll give you the link:
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11/10/2013 c27 imabrx2
I didn't like this one quite as much as the first one, but i am intrigued by the lion shifter part of the story.
I didn't like this one quite as much as the first one, but i am intrigued by the lion shifter part of the story.
10/24/2013 c27 
19Alaeryel
OMG MY GOD -REALLY? IT ENDED LIKE THIS? Well I can say this for you-YOU REALLY REALLY KNOW HOW TO KEEP YOUR READERS at ATTENTION and HOOKED! I really like Gabriel's character and can't wait to see what happens from here. I know the third installment deals with mxm which I don't normally read but I have to read it-one because your writing is too AMAZING not to and because you have CAPTURED my attention with the first two and I can deal with anything because of it! Your imagination just ASTOUNDS ME!
19AlaeryelOMG MY GOD -REALLY? IT ENDED LIKE THIS? Well I can say this for you-YOU REALLY REALLY KNOW HOW TO KEEP YOUR READERS at ATTENTION and HOOKED! I really like Gabriel's character and can't wait to see what happens from here. I know the third installment deals with mxm which I don't normally read but I have to read it-one because your writing is too AMAZING not to and because you have CAPTURED my attention with the first two and I can deal with anything because of it! Your imagination just ASTOUNDS ME!
10/24/2013 c26 Alaeryel
POSITIVELY BEAUTIFUL Tumble-it actually brought tears to my eyes! What an AMAZING way you wrote this and I loved the uniqueness of the wedding-I don't ever recall reading one like this!
POSITIVELY BEAUTIFUL Tumble-it actually brought tears to my eyes! What an AMAZING way you wrote this and I loved the uniqueness of the wedding-I don't ever recall reading one like this!
10/24/2013 c25 Alaeryel
Well this was quite informative and IT BROKE MY HEART! They may have done things and was somewhat cruel in their methods but it sounds like they really cared for her and enough for the husband to die TRYING TO SAVE HER! I am beginning to like Regina at least a little right now and Cole seems truly shocked by what he heard and Glen-I am not sure about yet! I LOVED how Regina totally accepted the situation with Melanie-ABSOLUTELY A GREAT CHAPTER!
Well this was quite informative and IT BROKE MY HEART! They may have done things and was somewhat cruel in their methods but it sounds like they really cared for her and enough for the husband to die TRYING TO SAVE HER! I am beginning to like Regina at least a little right now and Cole seems truly shocked by what he heard and Glen-I am not sure about yet! I LOVED how Regina totally accepted the situation with Melanie-ABSOLUTELY A GREAT CHAPTER!
10/23/2013 c23 Alaeryel
Ok NOW I fully understand the reasoning behind it and though they had good intentions-I don't think it was fair for them to do it but I can live with it and I hope that some day Talon can forgive them and now I am bawling as I am being kicked off the computer and can't finish it tonight! SNIFF SNIFF! YOU ARE BLOODY BRILLIANT!
Ok NOW I fully understand the reasoning behind it and though they had good intentions-I don't think it was fair for them to do it but I can live with it and I hope that some day Talon can forgive them and now I am bawling as I am being kicked off the computer and can't finish it tonight! SNIFF SNIFF! YOU ARE BLOODY BRILLIANT!
10/23/2013 c22 Alaeryel
OK Tumble-THAT WAS SOOOOOOO WRONG! OMG I NEARLY DIED OF A HEART ATTACK! I guess I could understand why they felt it necessary to test both Talon and Melanie-ESPECIALLY Melanie BUT THAT WAS WRONG! Although I do have to say you REALLY HAVE A WAY with incorporating ALOT OF ANGST and TWISTS into this story!
OK Tumble-THAT WAS SOOOOOOO WRONG! OMG I NEARLY DIED OF A HEART ATTACK! I guess I could understand why they felt it necessary to test both Talon and Melanie-ESPECIALLY Melanie BUT THAT WAS WRONG! Although I do have to say you REALLY HAVE A WAY with incorporating ALOT OF ANGST and TWISTS into this story!
10/23/2013 c21 Alaeryel
Whatever Lukas may have found out-it isn't true! The hunters is setting her up for some reason or they have subconsciously brain washed her and she doesn't know! I KNOW IT ISN'T THE TRUTH! Would figure her wolf would show up now-DAMN DAMN DAMN AND BLOODY FU**ING DAMN!
Whatever Lukas may have found out-it isn't true! The hunters is setting her up for some reason or they have subconsciously brain washed her and she doesn't know! I KNOW IT ISN'T THE TRUTH! Would figure her wolf would show up now-DAMN DAMN DAMN AND BLOODY FU**ING DAMN!
10/23/2013 c20 Alaeryel
Knowing Lukas-he has something up his sleeve and I can't tell if it is GOOD or BAD but I will just have to wait and see! I bet Melanie will be able to transform atleast eventually and I am so BLOODY EXCITED I can't control myself! OUT OF THIS WORLD Tumble!
Knowing Lukas-he has something up his sleeve and I can't tell if it is GOOD or BAD but I will just have to wait and see! I bet Melanie will be able to transform atleast eventually and I am so BLOODY EXCITED I can't control myself! OUT OF THIS WORLD Tumble!
10/23/2013 c19 Alaeryel
OMG OMG OMG-DIED LAUGHING MY A** OFF! Leave it to Sophia to pull this BUT I wonder what there was that made her think Melanie was a minor outside of her awkwardness and shyness. Well Melanie is getting quite the introduction around the pack isn't she-ATLEAST she is holding up well-for now! I find myself out of breath with wanting more and forcing myself to take time for the reviews as my instinct tells me to READ READ READ! Reviews are important in so many ways and I want you to know how much I can feel and see the emotional side to this story and what an AMAZING job you are doing writing it!
OMG OMG OMG-DIED LAUGHING MY A** OFF! Leave it to Sophia to pull this BUT I wonder what there was that made her think Melanie was a minor outside of her awkwardness and shyness. Well Melanie is getting quite the introduction around the pack isn't she-ATLEAST she is holding up well-for now! I find myself out of breath with wanting more and forcing myself to take time for the reviews as my instinct tells me to READ READ READ! Reviews are important in so many ways and I want you to know how much I can feel and see the emotional side to this story and what an AMAZING job you are doing writing it!
10/23/2013 c18 Alaeryel
Ok short and sweet-I need a cold shower now! THIS WAS BEYOND PERFECTION AND AMAZING!
Ok short and sweet-I need a cold shower now! THIS WAS BEYOND PERFECTION AND AMAZING!
10/23/2013 c17 Alaeryel
OMG AND LOL-PRICELESS! I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOOOOOVED THIS CHAPTER! I can understand Talon not wanting to tell anyone that she is his mate atleast not right now and I can't believe that Sophie wants to ship her off-THAT CANNOT HAPPEN! Leave it to Emma to mention the fact that Melanie is Talon's mate-I AM SO GIDDY over this chapter!
OMG AND LOL-PRICELESS! I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOOOOOVED THIS CHAPTER! I can understand Talon not wanting to tell anyone that she is his mate atleast not right now and I can't believe that Sophie wants to ship her off-THAT CANNOT HAPPEN! Leave it to Emma to mention the fact that Melanie is Talon's mate-I AM SO GIDDY over this chapter!
10/23/2013 c16 Alaeryel
Well that didn't do anything good for Melanie with the first meeting of any of his pack but hey a sister has a right to be worried and then explode when the sibling is found! But really to go off like that on her-not necessary but made for an EXCEPTIONAL chapter. Atleast Jason was kinder but she still didn't feel comfortable with him and I see his trying to worm info from her didn't go as well as he was probably hoping for. I loved the banter about the salad and Melanie offering her burrito to him!
Well that didn't do anything good for Melanie with the first meeting of any of his pack but hey a sister has a right to be worried and then explode when the sibling is found! But really to go off like that on her-not necessary but made for an EXCEPTIONAL chapter. Atleast Jason was kinder but she still didn't feel comfortable with him and I see his trying to worm info from her didn't go as well as he was probably hoping for. I loved the banter about the salad and Melanie offering her burrito to him!
10/23/2013 c15 Alaeryel
Well I never thought of her having a brother and I have to wonder what exactly Glen wanted to say to her. It couldn't have been a simple, fast trip without incidence could it? But then again where would the fun in that be? LOVED the chapter!
Well I never thought of her having a brother and I have to wonder what exactly Glen wanted to say to her. It couldn't have been a simple, fast trip without incidence could it? But then again where would the fun in that be? LOVED the chapter!
10/23/2013 c14 Alaeryel
LOL-I can't say I would enjoy that kind of work either although I grew up on farms and of course I LOVED THAT! I DEFINITELY see where she is coming from and I can't say as I blame her. Maybe she could do some babysitting? Some house cleaning for some elderly women? Not like my ideas are helpful as you have this story already planned out but hey thought I would state them anyway! I am glad she is growing more and more comfortable with him and I can't wait to read about how she may deal with some of them from his pack-although I do think maybe Lukas would be one to hold off meeting for awhile! ABSOLUTE PERFECTION FOR ME!
LOL-I can't say I would enjoy that kind of work either although I grew up on farms and of course I LOVED THAT! I DEFINITELY see where she is coming from and I can't say as I blame her. Maybe she could do some babysitting? Some house cleaning for some elderly women? Not like my ideas are helpful as you have this story already planned out but hey thought I would state them anyway! I am glad she is growing more and more comfortable with him and I can't wait to read about how she may deal with some of them from his pack-although I do think maybe Lukas would be one to hold off meeting for awhile! ABSOLUTE PERFECTION FOR ME!