for The Kingdom of Voices4/2/2013 c44 Guest
Oh and one more thing, Tratcher is just cool.
Oh and one more thing, Tratcher is just cool.
4/2/2013 c44 Guest
My heart just broke*_*... first Phinn, now Hayden, well technically first Hayden and now Phinn. I guess Hayden was right when he said he was already changing now that he became king. But he still seems like Hayden, maybe the binding process didn't finish, and MAYBE HE DIED WHEN HAYDEN WAS BLESSED! haw probably not, and their going to need him to kill Issac. AND THIS PROVES THAT COLE WAS RIGHT! Poor Elena, but I love that Phnns strongest emotion is his love for her. Goodness, I didn't think it was possible to get any worse. Hopefully Issac and Vincent will destroy each other...but OMG HAYDEN! T_T
My heart just broke*_*... first Phinn, now Hayden, well technically first Hayden and now Phinn. I guess Hayden was right when he said he was already changing now that he became king. But he still seems like Hayden, maybe the binding process didn't finish, and MAYBE HE DIED WHEN HAYDEN WAS BLESSED! haw probably not, and their going to need him to kill Issac. AND THIS PROVES THAT COLE WAS RIGHT! Poor Elena, but I love that Phnns strongest emotion is his love for her. Goodness, I didn't think it was possible to get any worse. Hopefully Issac and Vincent will destroy each other...but OMG HAYDEN! T_T
3/30/2013 c43 Guest
YES! Goodness all three of them in the same room, I don't know why but I found there interaction adorable, especially Clinton's lol. And now we know why he wont marry Irena, despite that I hope he still marries her. And Tratcher, even though he tried to take Robert away from Irving, I still like him. And I really hope they get Phinn back:( and since Hunts supposed to take on Phinns emotions, he'll probably love her if he ever gets his memories back, which I hope he doesn't, because Hunt loving Elena is just disturbing. And I still think Tratcher might be the son of a Chaste Beauty, because he gets feelings just like Elena, Phinn, Anya and Stienhorth did. And I don't think Clinton will turn out like the Twins, he has a good heart if hes willing to risk his life for someone he doesn't like. And I like his friendship with Elena, his bluntness and her, well I don't want to say nosiness, how about investigative nature lol make a good pair. And still no one knows about their engagement, well maybe Lawson or Cole blurted it out to him? Im really hoping that a little bit of Phinn will be able to come through, and again POOR ELENA! I think she's just in shock cause everything happened so fast, well everything bad happens fast, and shes not able to process it really, goodness this has got me on splinters every time I read it whether ot be good or bad lol
YES! Goodness all three of them in the same room, I don't know why but I found there interaction adorable, especially Clinton's lol. And now we know why he wont marry Irena, despite that I hope he still marries her. And Tratcher, even though he tried to take Robert away from Irving, I still like him. And I really hope they get Phinn back:( and since Hunts supposed to take on Phinns emotions, he'll probably love her if he ever gets his memories back, which I hope he doesn't, because Hunt loving Elena is just disturbing. And I still think Tratcher might be the son of a Chaste Beauty, because he gets feelings just like Elena, Phinn, Anya and Stienhorth did. And I don't think Clinton will turn out like the Twins, he has a good heart if hes willing to risk his life for someone he doesn't like. And I like his friendship with Elena, his bluntness and her, well I don't want to say nosiness, how about investigative nature lol make a good pair. And still no one knows about their engagement, well maybe Lawson or Cole blurted it out to him? Im really hoping that a little bit of Phinn will be able to come through, and again POOR ELENA! I think she's just in shock cause everything happened so fast, well everything bad happens fast, and shes not able to process it really, goodness this has got me on splinters every time I read it whether ot be good or bad lol
3/30/2013 c1 Guest
Poor Phinn:( maybe, just maybe Phinn's soul will be stronger than Hunts, but to have then he'll have traces of Hunts soul:( its a lose lose situation unless they figure out a way to reverse it completely, hopefully thy do. Optimism Elena! And somethings up with Tratcher, hes like psychic
Poor Phinn:( maybe, just maybe Phinn's soul will be stronger than Hunts, but to have then he'll have traces of Hunts soul:( its a lose lose situation unless they figure out a way to reverse it completely, hopefully thy do. Optimism Elena! And somethings up with Tratcher, hes like psychic
3/27/2013 c42 Guest
No.4 I really like Tratcher, he seems so calm despite everything that's happening, maybe that's just the old age, very reassurring.
No.5 I'm itching to find out why Tratcher wants Elena to be on on the Funneling, maybe he lied and there is a way to save Phinn, goodness there better be!
No.6 lol that whole soul rank thing was funny, poor Elena coming in last:( maybe this will come in handy, the soul rank, not the fact that she came in last. Like how despite everyhting the Sons are still well, the Sons lol.
No.7 Want this make killing Hunt more difficult cause they have to bless him twice, but he's inside Phinn, what if they accidently bless Phinn!
No.8 I'm so sad over Phinn right now D:
No.4 I really like Tratcher, he seems so calm despite everything that's happening, maybe that's just the old age, very reassurring.
No.5 I'm itching to find out why Tratcher wants Elena to be on on the Funneling, maybe he lied and there is a way to save Phinn, goodness there better be!
No.6 lol that whole soul rank thing was funny, poor Elena coming in last:( maybe this will come in handy, the soul rank, not the fact that she came in last. Like how despite everyhting the Sons are still well, the Sons lol.
No.7 Want this make killing Hunt more difficult cause they have to bless him twice, but he's inside Phinn, what if they accidently bless Phinn!
No.8 I'm so sad over Phinn right now D:
3/27/2013 c42 Guest
Okay...No.1 Phinn T_T
No.2 Cole is like the master or theories, what if he's right and thus Vincent guy has been body hopping for hundreds of years, that would explain the chaste beauties having visions of future event's that wouldn't happen until a hundred years later. At least that's my theory. Or what if its Jasper's dad who turned into a demon? I cant seem to let that one go lol
No.3 Tratcher may be senile but he's far more observant, than the rest of them are and how he knew that Elena would be kidnapped, is he a son of a Chaste Beauty too?
Okay...No.1 Phinn T_T
No.2 Cole is like the master or theories, what if he's right and thus Vincent guy has been body hopping for hundreds of years, that would explain the chaste beauties having visions of future event's that wouldn't happen until a hundred years later. At least that's my theory. Or what if its Jasper's dad who turned into a demon? I cant seem to let that one go lol
No.3 Tratcher may be senile but he's far more observant, than the rest of them are and how he knew that Elena would be kidnapped, is he a son of a Chaste Beauty too?
3/27/2013 c42 The Lady Bard
Wow. I'm more than a little heart-sore right now, I want Phinn to be alright, and for him and Elena to get married and live happily ever after and there are only EIGHT chapters to go and it still seems bad! I am so anxious right now... Then again, a lot can change in eight chapters, especially in your stories. Twists and turns everywhere I look!
Wow. I'm more than a little heart-sore right now, I want Phinn to be alright, and for him and Elena to get married and live happily ever after and there are only EIGHT chapters to go and it still seems bad! I am so anxious right now... Then again, a lot can change in eight chapters, especially in your stories. Twists and turns everywhere I look!
3/26/2013 c35 bego.oh
I'm so happy you have no idea! I've been waiting for this moment for so long! They so derserve each other! After all the chaos is nice to have that special moment between Elena and Phinn! I wish my boyfriends would propose like Phinn did!
I'm so happy you have no idea! I've been waiting for this moment for so long! They so derserve each other! After all the chaos is nice to have that special moment between Elena and Phinn! I wish my boyfriends would propose like Phinn did!
3/26/2013 c41 Annie
Ahhh!
Ahhh!
Words cannot describe this story!
I didn't review every chapter when I was reading, but I was really shipping Elena x Lawson (I still think they would be cute together) but somewhere along the line I realised Elena x Phinn was just as awesome!
And I really likes Turner, I don't know why! Cole is also awesome, with his dumb hero-ness and pretending to be a coward so he wouldn't have to do anything!
And Ryder! I liked her at the very start, but then when it said that all the sons liked her, I got suspicious, and as soon as she tried to sedate Phinn before she was gonna get infected I decided she was evil.
Also, SAGE and GARETT are awesome! Sage just needed him to bring her outta her shell :3
Regarding this chapter: I never liked Devin Smith! And STAY AWAy FROM COLE SMITH!
Ahhh!
Ahhh!
Words cannot describe this story!
I didn't review every chapter when I was reading, but I was really shipping Elena x Lawson (I still think they would be cute together) but somewhere along the line I realised Elena x Phinn was just as awesome!
And I really likes Turner, I don't know why! Cole is also awesome, with his dumb hero-ness and pretending to be a coward so he wouldn't have to do anything!
And Ryder! I liked her at the very start, but then when it said that all the sons liked her, I got suspicious, and as soon as she tried to sedate Phinn before she was gonna get infected I decided she was evil.
Also, SAGE and GARETT are awesome! Sage just needed him to bring her outta her shell :3
Regarding this chapter: I never liked Devin Smith! And STAY AWAy FROM COLE SMITH!
3/25/2013 c41 Guest
So Phinn was right about not trusting Smith, I had completely forgotten about her. Poor Hayden. And goodness I kept screaming at Elena to take the shot! lol good thing Sage was nearby, of course where else would she be than near Garret lol I love their relationship, especially when it comes to protecting each other. Okay so we have two dead powerful magic users, a soulless Phinn, a traitor, and another dead traitor, and everyone else is just injured, coruporating, or useless in a fight lol oh and building full of bodies. Hayden has got his work cut out for him, poor thing:( I would like him to have some time with Emma too. And I keep forgetting about Quentin, Ryder and Turner, ooooh what if Jenny had her baby by now!
So Phinn was right about not trusting Smith, I had completely forgotten about her. Poor Hayden. And goodness I kept screaming at Elena to take the shot! lol good thing Sage was nearby, of course where else would she be than near Garret lol I love their relationship, especially when it comes to protecting each other. Okay so we have two dead powerful magic users, a soulless Phinn, a traitor, and another dead traitor, and everyone else is just injured, coruporating, or useless in a fight lol oh and building full of bodies. Hayden has got his work cut out for him, poor thing:( I would like him to have some time with Emma too. And I keep forgetting about Quentin, Ryder and Turner, ooooh what if Jenny had her baby by now!
3/25/2013 c41 The Lady Bard
Well, I was wrong about Kieran. Although, I still don't. like. him. On the plus side, the traitor was caught - yay! - and hopefully things will get a bit better.
Well, I was wrong about Kieran. Although, I still don't. like. him. On the plus side, the traitor was caught - yay! - and hopefully things will get a bit better.
3/25/2013 c40 Annie
I've just read every single Kingdom book.
They are all amazing.
You should try and get this published.
Seriously, please do, then my friends will actually consider reading it rather than saying 'but its not a proper story'.
Literally, this story is already a part of my life, and if it was a proper 'book', it would definitely be in my top ten. (Or maybe even top five)
Can't wait for the next chapter,
You are my new favourite Author.
(Also, HUNT HAS PHINNS BODY NOOOOOOoooooooooo...!)
-Annie
I've just read every single Kingdom book.
They are all amazing.
You should try and get this published.
Seriously, please do, then my friends will actually consider reading it rather than saying 'but its not a proper story'.
Literally, this story is already a part of my life, and if it was a proper 'book', it would definitely be in my top ten. (Or maybe even top five)
Can't wait for the next chapter,
You are my new favourite Author.
(Also, HUNT HAS PHINNS BODY NOOOOOOoooooooooo...!)
-Annie
3/24/2013 c40 Guest
No.1 I can't believe I hit the nail on the head with that soul thing, why!
No.2 Cole is insanely smart, he pays attention to detail, perceptive is the word I think.
No.3 Don't let Cole die!
No.4 I'm so sad about the twins right now:( I really wanted to see more of them and their brothers T_T
No.5 I'm pretty sure I know what the De word is, if Cole was there I bet he would've figured it out.
No.6 Danger needs to stop being so indifferent to Wood, like for real formality is being thrown out the window, everyone is breaking these magical rules, but they need to, if Hunts not playing by the rules, why should they...then again I know the rules are there for a reason and the minute you start to blur the lines it becomes difficult to differentiate between what's good and bad...lol I lost myself a bit there...
No.7 I will now precede to obsess over who could possibly be the traitor, I have a few people in mind already...
No.8 GOODNESS COLE!
No.1 I can't believe I hit the nail on the head with that soul thing, why!
No.2 Cole is insanely smart, he pays attention to detail, perceptive is the word I think.
No.3 Don't let Cole die!
No.4 I'm so sad about the twins right now:( I really wanted to see more of them and their brothers T_T
No.5 I'm pretty sure I know what the De word is, if Cole was there I bet he would've figured it out.
No.6 Danger needs to stop being so indifferent to Wood, like for real formality is being thrown out the window, everyone is breaking these magical rules, but they need to, if Hunts not playing by the rules, why should they...then again I know the rules are there for a reason and the minute you start to blur the lines it becomes difficult to differentiate between what's good and bad...lol I lost myself a bit there...
No.7 I will now precede to obsess over who could possibly be the traitor, I have a few people in mind already...
No.8 GOODNESS COLE!
3/24/2013 c40 The Lady Bard
I'm so worried. There are ten chapters to go, and everything is still awful! And getting worse with each chapter! If Cole isn't okay, I'll be devastated, he's one of my favourite characters. (He's just funny.) And Phinn... I thought it might have been something like this... I just really want a happy ending, and for everyone to be okay. And I cannot wait to find out who the traitor is, I'm leaning towards Kieran, there is just something. about. him.
I'm so worried. There are ten chapters to go, and everything is still awful! And getting worse with each chapter! If Cole isn't okay, I'll be devastated, he's one of my favourite characters. (He's just funny.) And Phinn... I thought it might have been something like this... I just really want a happy ending, and for everyone to be okay. And I cannot wait to find out who the traitor is, I'm leaning towards Kieran, there is just something. about. him.
3/24/2013 c39 Guest
Hunt is in Phinn's body...HE'S IN HIS BODY! HE HAS TO BE! AND I TAKE BACK ALL THE BAD THINGS I'VE SAID AND DIDN'T SAG ABOU JASPER, AND GARRETS BEEN THROUGH ENOUGH, HE WAS JUST ABOUT RECOVERED! BUT WHERE THE BLANCKETY BLANK IS PHINN! THERE MUST BE A WAY TP GET HIM BACK AND HIS MEMORIES! WAIT! IF HUNT REALLY IS IN PHINNS BODY, THEN MAYBE IT WAS A GOOD THING WINTER DIDNT RETRIEVE HIS MEMORIES, CAUSE THEN IT WOULD HAVE BEEN HINTS MEMORIES...OKAY IM GETTING AHEAD OF THE STORY, HOPEFULLY IM WRONG, JUST WRONG...POOR ELENA:(
Hunt is in Phinn's body...HE'S IN HIS BODY! HE HAS TO BE! AND I TAKE BACK ALL THE BAD THINGS I'VE SAID AND DIDN'T SAG ABOU JASPER, AND GARRETS BEEN THROUGH ENOUGH, HE WAS JUST ABOUT RECOVERED! BUT WHERE THE BLANCKETY BLANK IS PHINN! THERE MUST BE A WAY TP GET HIM BACK AND HIS MEMORIES! WAIT! IF HUNT REALLY IS IN PHINNS BODY, THEN MAYBE IT WAS A GOOD THING WINTER DIDNT RETRIEVE HIS MEMORIES, CAUSE THEN IT WOULD HAVE BEEN HINTS MEMORIES...OKAY IM GETTING AHEAD OF THE STORY, HOPEFULLY IM WRONG, JUST WRONG...POOR ELENA:(