for The Kingdom of Voices3/22/2013 c37 
1lobsterwife
Shiiiiit. Of course bad things must continue to happen even after Hunt's supposed birth. SIIIGH. This whole series better end happily. Or else I'll be quite sad :( I was also thinking ALLL the way back to book one, as a I often do, and I remembered something that happened back when Lawson proposed to Elena. When he asked her if he was the right man for her, Elena had a vision, and in that vision she saw the fantasy version of Phinn. So basically, I'm wondering if the whole Phinn/Elena thing was being foreshadowed from the start!
1lobsterwifeShiiiiit. Of course bad things must continue to happen even after Hunt's supposed birth. SIIIGH. This whole series better end happily. Or else I'll be quite sad :( I was also thinking ALLL the way back to book one, as a I often do, and I remembered something that happened back when Lawson proposed to Elena. When he asked her if he was the right man for her, Elena had a vision, and in that vision she saw the fantasy version of Phinn. So basically, I'm wondering if the whole Phinn/Elena thing was being foreshadowed from the start!
3/22/2013 c36 Guest
I just love Elena and Cole's relationship, there so sweet together in a sibling way, and its so sad that somethings wrong with Phinn right after he proposed, please let him be okay:(
I just love Elena and Cole's relationship, there so sweet together in a sibling way, and its so sad that somethings wrong with Phinn right after he proposed, please let him be okay:(
3/22/2013 c37 Hanna
Oh, no. I've a theory about Phinn and Hunt, and it's not good! But it seems far-fetched, so I hope I'm wrong...
Oh, no. I've a theory about Phinn and Hunt, and it's not good! But it seems far-fetched, so I hope I'm wrong...
3/22/2013 c37 Guest
Wow ask and you shall receive, Hunts dead? No not gonna believe it, Hunt is like a roach, no matter how maaaaaaany times you step on it, it'll get back up and start crawling around again, until you spray it with some of that heavy duty wasp spray. Sorry for the gruesome description, I'm not that cruel to insects lol. And wow a massacre? That was the last thing I expected I'm just really shocked and sad that the new chaste beauty woke up to a world only to be killed and probably brutally if it was the others, and the old women that took care of them too:( And the whole situation wiggle Phinn, I cant even be happy that Hunt is dead. But if he is that'll give Clinton and Irving enough time to heal. By the way I like how heroic Cole is becoming, like he can almost hold his own, and I'm not talking like in a fight...lol I'm probably not making sense. Also I hope Elena gets to reveal her proposal soon, two down...a lot more to go lol. My gosh I cant believe I forgot about the rest of the sons, Quentin, Ryder and Turner, they've been put of the picture for soooo long:( man I'm still really shocked over the fact that they were all killed?! I guess before was the calm before the storm, or maybe Hunts death will be the calm before the storm, where is the Storms? lol GOODNESSS I CANT BELIEVE THEIR ALL DEAD! T_T
Wow ask and you shall receive, Hunts dead? No not gonna believe it, Hunt is like a roach, no matter how maaaaaaany times you step on it, it'll get back up and start crawling around again, until you spray it with some of that heavy duty wasp spray. Sorry for the gruesome description, I'm not that cruel to insects lol. And wow a massacre? That was the last thing I expected I'm just really shocked and sad that the new chaste beauty woke up to a world only to be killed and probably brutally if it was the others, and the old women that took care of them too:( And the whole situation wiggle Phinn, I cant even be happy that Hunt is dead. But if he is that'll give Clinton and Irving enough time to heal. By the way I like how heroic Cole is becoming, like he can almost hold his own, and I'm not talking like in a fight...lol I'm probably not making sense. Also I hope Elena gets to reveal her proposal soon, two down...a lot more to go lol. My gosh I cant believe I forgot about the rest of the sons, Quentin, Ryder and Turner, they've been put of the picture for soooo long:( man I'm still really shocked over the fact that they were all killed?! I guess before was the calm before the storm, or maybe Hunts death will be the calm before the storm, where is the Storms? lol GOODNESSS I CANT BELIEVE THEIR ALL DEAD! T_T
3/20/2013 c36 Guest
Oh. My. Goodness. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME! NO WAY CAN PHINN BE IN TROUBLE RIGHT AFTER HE PROPOSED! I KNOW IT HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH HUNT, I HAVE NEVER DISLIKED OR JUST DOWNRIGHT HATED HUNT ILKE I DO NOW, IF I COULD ID GET IN THIS STORY AND BEAT HIS...BUTT! AND COLE IS SOOO SWEET AT THE END THERE, MY HEART JUST BROLE FOR ELENA T_T AND SHE HAS PARENTS OUT THERE O.o I HOPE SHE GOES AND FINDS THEM SOMEDAY AND BUILD A CONNECTION! THATS SOO SAD HOW THERE TAKEN AWAY LIKE THAT, KNOWING SOMEDAY THEIR GOING TO AWAKEN, THEY MUST KNOW ELENA IS OUT THERE SOMEWHERE. MAYBE THEY ALREADY DO! I MEAN ELENA HAS GOTTEN AROUND ESPECIALLY NOW THAT SHES WITH PHINN (PHINNEAS XD) GOODNESS PLEASE SOMEONE JUST BASH HUNTS HEAD IN FOR ME T_T
Oh. My. Goodness. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME! NO WAY CAN PHINN BE IN TROUBLE RIGHT AFTER HE PROPOSED! I KNOW IT HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH HUNT, I HAVE NEVER DISLIKED OR JUST DOWNRIGHT HATED HUNT ILKE I DO NOW, IF I COULD ID GET IN THIS STORY AND BEAT HIS...BUTT! AND COLE IS SOOO SWEET AT THE END THERE, MY HEART JUST BROLE FOR ELENA T_T AND SHE HAS PARENTS OUT THERE O.o I HOPE SHE GOES AND FINDS THEM SOMEDAY AND BUILD A CONNECTION! THATS SOO SAD HOW THERE TAKEN AWAY LIKE THAT, KNOWING SOMEDAY THEIR GOING TO AWAKEN, THEY MUST KNOW ELENA IS OUT THERE SOMEWHERE. MAYBE THEY ALREADY DO! I MEAN ELENA HAS GOTTEN AROUND ESPECIALLY NOW THAT SHES WITH PHINN (PHINNEAS XD) GOODNESS PLEASE SOMEONE JUST BASH HUNTS HEAD IN FOR ME T_T
3/20/2013 c35 lobsterwife
OH MY GOOOOOD. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL I CA'NT/. Why are they the most perfect human beings alive? I was tearing up right along with Elena AHHHH SO CUTE. It's so romantic siiiigh. And I was laughing at how dense Elena is odhfidhfjd you dummy. It's actually surprising to me that Phinn is that romantic of a person though? It's kind of adorable. And how he proposed in a way that Elena would be comfortable with, or like, how it's done in the fantasy world. AHHH it's so sweet. I love them.
OH MY GOOOOOD. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL I CA'NT/. Why are they the most perfect human beings alive? I was tearing up right along with Elena AHHHH SO CUTE. It's so romantic siiiigh. And I was laughing at how dense Elena is odhfidhfjd you dummy. It's actually surprising to me that Phinn is that romantic of a person though? It's kind of adorable. And how he proposed in a way that Elena would be comfortable with, or like, how it's done in the fantasy world. AHHH it's so sweet. I love them.
3/20/2013 c35 The Lady Bard
This chapter made. my. day. I loved it. I love Phinn and Elena, they are one of my all time favourite cannon couples (I love how they're CANNON) and. I can't tell you how much I adore them. I've always liked Phinn, from the very beginning, even while I disliked him. My feelings for him are complicated.
This series is brilliant, one of my most favourite on the whole site - on the whole internet! The plot is fantastic, I hardly ever see things coming, but then looking back I can see all the hints, which is awesome. Your characters. I love characters, and yours are just perfect. I love them all, except Hunt, of course.
I can't wait to see how it all ends, but at the same time, I'm not going to have my almost daily updates to look forward to... I'll need a new frequently updated series to look forward to.
You deserve all the kudos for this. Really. Absolutely. all. the. kudos.
Also, sorry for spamming your inbox. I had to favourite all eight stories the other day, and was feeling guilty after, not for favourite-ing, but for spamming. Although, I like to think it was the good sort of spamming.
This chapter made. my. day. I loved it. I love Phinn and Elena, they are one of my all time favourite cannon couples (I love how they're CANNON) and. I can't tell you how much I adore them. I've always liked Phinn, from the very beginning, even while I disliked him. My feelings for him are complicated.
This series is brilliant, one of my most favourite on the whole site - on the whole internet! The plot is fantastic, I hardly ever see things coming, but then looking back I can see all the hints, which is awesome. Your characters. I love characters, and yours are just perfect. I love them all, except Hunt, of course.
I can't wait to see how it all ends, but at the same time, I'm not going to have my almost daily updates to look forward to... I'll need a new frequently updated series to look forward to.
You deserve all the kudos for this. Really. Absolutely. all. the. kudos.
Also, sorry for spamming your inbox. I had to favourite all eight stories the other day, and was feeling guilty after, not for favourite-ing, but for spamming. Although, I like to think it was the good sort of spamming.
3/19/2013 c35 Guest
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! OOOOOOOH MYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOSH! HE FINALLY DID IT! PHINN AND ELENA ARE THE BEST COUPLE IN THW WORLD! I DID NOT REALIZE HOW MUCH I LOVED THEM UNTIL I STARTED CRYING WHEN HE PROPOSED, I WAS LITERALLY JUMPING UP AND DOWN! YOU ARE NOW MY FAVOROTE AUTHOR! FORGET EVERY OTHER BOOK IVE READ, I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO ATTACHED OR INTUNE WITH A CHARACTEE THAN I AM WITH THE ONES IN YOUR STORIES! THEY'RE GETTING MARRIED! AND LMAO! PHINNEAS?! OH LORDY PHINN, I CANNOT GET OVER, I CANT BELIEVE PHINM WASNT HIS REAL NAME, BUT IT DOES EXPLAIN ALL HIS NICKNAMES. AND ELENA BEING UNAFFECTIONATE, I NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT IT UNTIL PHINN BROUGHT IT UP, BUT HES RIGHT, LOOKING BACK ELENA NEVER INITIATED ANYTHING( THIS ACTUALLY MADE ME REALIZE THAT IM THE SAME WAY LOL, SOMETHING TO WORK ON) OOOOOOOOH I WONDER HOW ANYAS GOING TO TAKE IT?! AND WHO ARE THEY GOING TO TELL FIRST?! AND WHEN ARE THE GOING TO DO IT! MY GOODNESS HE DIDNT KNOW WHICH HAND TO PUT THE RING ON, AND I LOOOVE HOW PHINN DOES SOMETHINGS LIKE IN ELENAS WORLD, THANKS TO ANYA! Okay now I'm gonna reread this chapter ten more times lol
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! OOOOOOOH MYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOSH! HE FINALLY DID IT! PHINN AND ELENA ARE THE BEST COUPLE IN THW WORLD! I DID NOT REALIZE HOW MUCH I LOVED THEM UNTIL I STARTED CRYING WHEN HE PROPOSED, I WAS LITERALLY JUMPING UP AND DOWN! YOU ARE NOW MY FAVOROTE AUTHOR! FORGET EVERY OTHER BOOK IVE READ, I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO ATTACHED OR INTUNE WITH A CHARACTEE THAN I AM WITH THE ONES IN YOUR STORIES! THEY'RE GETTING MARRIED! AND LMAO! PHINNEAS?! OH LORDY PHINN, I CANNOT GET OVER, I CANT BELIEVE PHINM WASNT HIS REAL NAME, BUT IT DOES EXPLAIN ALL HIS NICKNAMES. AND ELENA BEING UNAFFECTIONATE, I NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT IT UNTIL PHINN BROUGHT IT UP, BUT HES RIGHT, LOOKING BACK ELENA NEVER INITIATED ANYTHING( THIS ACTUALLY MADE ME REALIZE THAT IM THE SAME WAY LOL, SOMETHING TO WORK ON) OOOOOOOOH I WONDER HOW ANYAS GOING TO TAKE IT?! AND WHO ARE THEY GOING TO TELL FIRST?! AND WHEN ARE THE GOING TO DO IT! MY GOODNESS HE DIDNT KNOW WHICH HAND TO PUT THE RING ON, AND I LOOOVE HOW PHINN DOES SOMETHINGS LIKE IN ELENAS WORLD, THANKS TO ANYA! Okay now I'm gonna reread this chapter ten more times lol
3/18/2013 c34 Guest
GOODNESS! DANVER IS HEALED! BUT NOW CLINTON AND IRVING ARE OUT OF COMMISSION, BUT AT LEAST HUNTS STILL IN CAPTIVITY INSTEAD OF RINNING AROUND, AT LEAST NOT YET, AND HE MUST OF FELT THAT SURGE TOO. AND I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT GARRET! POOR THING ISNT THIS EXTRACTION ONLY GOING TO MAKE HIM WEAKER? AT LEAST HE'LL HAVE SAGE THEIR TO PROTECT HIM. AND YES! MAYBE PHINN WILL PROPOSE TO ELENA AGAIN! OR WELL HE HASNT DONE IT YET CAUSE HE KEPT GETTING INTERRUPTED, THE NEXT PERSON WHO DOES, IM GONNA MENTALLY BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF HIM LOL. AND WHERE DO CHASTE BEAUTIES COME FROM, ITS BEEN IN THE BACK OF MY MIND FOR A WHILE BUT I ALWAYS ASSUMED THEY APPEARED IN THE KINGDOM, FULLY GROWN LOL I DIDNT THINK THEY WERE ACTUALLY GROWING AND SOMEONE WAS TAKING CARE OF THEIR BODIES...THATS ACTUALLY A LITTLE CREEPY:O BUT ANYWAYS DANVER IS HEALED AND EVERYONE IS ALIVE, WEAKEND AND INJURED BUT ALIVE, HOPEFULLY THEY RECOVER SOON, AND I KNOW ITS A LONG SHOT, BUT I WISH THE TWINS WOULD HELP WITH THE EXTRACTION. MY GOSH I HOPE PHINN PROPOSES TO ELENA SOON, AND SHE BETTER SAY YES! AND THEN AFTER HUNT IS DEFEATED THEY COULD HAVE THEIR WEDDING! SO EXCITED! IM ALSO REALLY HAPPY THAT HAYDEN IS WALKING AROUND, BACK IN ACTION, WHEN HE WAS STANDING AROUND WITH THE SONS IT FELT LIKE OLD TIMES, EVEN THOUGH THEY WERE STILL FIGHTING HUNT LOL
GOODNESS! DANVER IS HEALED! BUT NOW CLINTON AND IRVING ARE OUT OF COMMISSION, BUT AT LEAST HUNTS STILL IN CAPTIVITY INSTEAD OF RINNING AROUND, AT LEAST NOT YET, AND HE MUST OF FELT THAT SURGE TOO. AND I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT GARRET! POOR THING ISNT THIS EXTRACTION ONLY GOING TO MAKE HIM WEAKER? AT LEAST HE'LL HAVE SAGE THEIR TO PROTECT HIM. AND YES! MAYBE PHINN WILL PROPOSE TO ELENA AGAIN! OR WELL HE HASNT DONE IT YET CAUSE HE KEPT GETTING INTERRUPTED, THE NEXT PERSON WHO DOES, IM GONNA MENTALLY BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF HIM LOL. AND WHERE DO CHASTE BEAUTIES COME FROM, ITS BEEN IN THE BACK OF MY MIND FOR A WHILE BUT I ALWAYS ASSUMED THEY APPEARED IN THE KINGDOM, FULLY GROWN LOL I DIDNT THINK THEY WERE ACTUALLY GROWING AND SOMEONE WAS TAKING CARE OF THEIR BODIES...THATS ACTUALLY A LITTLE CREEPY:O BUT ANYWAYS DANVER IS HEALED AND EVERYONE IS ALIVE, WEAKEND AND INJURED BUT ALIVE, HOPEFULLY THEY RECOVER SOON, AND I KNOW ITS A LONG SHOT, BUT I WISH THE TWINS WOULD HELP WITH THE EXTRACTION. MY GOSH I HOPE PHINN PROPOSES TO ELENA SOON, AND SHE BETTER SAY YES! AND THEN AFTER HUNT IS DEFEATED THEY COULD HAVE THEIR WEDDING! SO EXCITED! IM ALSO REALLY HAPPY THAT HAYDEN IS WALKING AROUND, BACK IN ACTION, WHEN HE WAS STANDING AROUND WITH THE SONS IT FELT LIKE OLD TIMES, EVEN THOUGH THEY WERE STILL FIGHTING HUNT LOL
3/16/2013 c32 Guest
WOAH I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING, I MEAN I KNEW WHO IRVING WAS TALKING ABOUT THE MINUTE HE SAID THAY HE WAS IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE BETROTHED TO ANOTHER, BUT IRVING BEING ROMANTICALLY INVOLVED WITH SOMEONE DID NOT ENTER MY MIND, AT ANY TIME LOL. BUT AT THE SAME TIME IM HAPPY! AND IRVING IS MAKING A HUGE MISTAKE IF HE BREAKS IT OFF! CUZ WINTER DOESNT EVEN LIKE HER LIKE THAT...I THINK. AND YES! THEY FINALLY FIGURED OUT THE REPEATEE FEAT! AT FIRST WHEN THEG STARTED THEORIZING I WAS LIKE, DANG THEIR GONNA HAVE TO KILL WOOD SO THEY CAN KILL HUNT THEN PUT WOODS SOUL BACK IN HIS BODY LOL I LIKE THEIR PLAN BETTER! AND THE TWINS, IS IT WEIRD THAT I LIKE THEM EVEN THOUGH THEIR HORRIBLE, I HOPE WE GET TO SEE MORE OF THEM! OH AND IM STILL WORRIED ABOUT DANVER, HOPEFULLY THEY RECREAT THAT ANTIDOTE SOON! AND WOOD! IS GOING TO BE SO HAPPY TO HEAR HE DOESNT HAVE TO DIE! AGAIN!
WOAH I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING, I MEAN I KNEW WHO IRVING WAS TALKING ABOUT THE MINUTE HE SAID THAY HE WAS IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE BETROTHED TO ANOTHER, BUT IRVING BEING ROMANTICALLY INVOLVED WITH SOMEONE DID NOT ENTER MY MIND, AT ANY TIME LOL. BUT AT THE SAME TIME IM HAPPY! AND IRVING IS MAKING A HUGE MISTAKE IF HE BREAKS IT OFF! CUZ WINTER DOESNT EVEN LIKE HER LIKE THAT...I THINK. AND YES! THEY FINALLY FIGURED OUT THE REPEATEE FEAT! AT FIRST WHEN THEG STARTED THEORIZING I WAS LIKE, DANG THEIR GONNA HAVE TO KILL WOOD SO THEY CAN KILL HUNT THEN PUT WOODS SOUL BACK IN HIS BODY LOL I LIKE THEIR PLAN BETTER! AND THE TWINS, IS IT WEIRD THAT I LIKE THEM EVEN THOUGH THEIR HORRIBLE, I HOPE WE GET TO SEE MORE OF THEM! OH AND IM STILL WORRIED ABOUT DANVER, HOPEFULLY THEY RECREAT THAT ANTIDOTE SOON! AND WOOD! IS GOING TO BE SO HAPPY TO HEAR HE DOESNT HAVE TO DIE! AGAIN!
3/16/2013 c32 Hanna
I'm all excited right now! But also sad, because this means one more step to the end of an amazing series.
I'm all excited right now! But also sad, because this means one more step to the end of an amazing series.
3/15/2013 c30 bego.oh
Love how the story is progressing! Every time you update, it literally makes my day! Although I wish there was more romance between Elena and Phinn! ;)
Love how the story is progressing! Every time you update, it literally makes my day! Although I wish there was more romance between Elena and Phinn! ;)
3/15/2013 c31 Guest
Yes they're figuring out the double blessing! And oh my goodness Im in love with Danver now! Please don't let him die, though I was hoping someone would take charge and give Hayden the antidote, and Hayden knows he would've done the same thing in his position. And Clinton's back! With all his humor! Oh yes and we're finally going to meet the twins!
Yes they're figuring out the double blessing! And oh my goodness Im in love with Danver now! Please don't let him die, though I was hoping someone would take charge and give Hayden the antidote, and Hayden knows he would've done the same thing in his position. And Clinton's back! With all his humor! Oh yes and we're finally going to meet the twins!
3/13/2013 c30 Guest
One more thing, it caught my attention as soon as he said it, but does Jasper's father coming back as a demon have anything to do with Hunt? At first I was thinking that he could be that thing that keeps coming back as their loved ones, Hunts servant, anyways jasper's father wasnt really on my mind but now it is, what him returning as a demon wasn't entirely his decision? If he really is tied in with Hunt, then I don't know, my head is starting to fill with theories of Hunt, Craig, and repeated double feats lol
One more thing, it caught my attention as soon as he said it, but does Jasper's father coming back as a demon have anything to do with Hunt? At first I was thinking that he could be that thing that keeps coming back as their loved ones, Hunts servant, anyways jasper's father wasnt really on my mind but now it is, what him returning as a demon wasn't entirely his decision? If he really is tied in with Hunt, then I don't know, my head is starting to fill with theories of Hunt, Craig, and repeated double feats lol
3/13/2013 c30 Guest
Wood Wood Wood! I knew this was going to be brought up sooner or later, the fact that they could kill Hunt by killing Wood, well not killing him, but letting him die, but then Hunt would come back as an even more powerful demon. And now Elena has a time limit, I hope she figures out that double feat soon, maybe her Anya and Olivier can get together again and brainstorm, I love their chaste beauty team! Lol And now we have gotten closer to Jasper, you know the moment he hit Elena I was like, your dead to me. But now I don't know, well now hes been promoted to I don't want you to die, but its not like I'm gonna be broken up of you do. I know harsh, but hes gotta redeem himself to me after hitting her like that lol. And I knew Elena was going to find out more about him, I like how her curiousity gets the best of her at times lol and it shows just how stubborn she can be. Oh yeah and maybe she'll tell Olivier about the plan so she'll stay away from Wood for a bit. By the way I'm loving there interactions between Elena and Wood, not in a romantic way but a we've been through something terrible together so now we're closer, liked Elena and Hayden's friendship, their best friends. And oh my goodness Hayden! If I was their I would've been like cut the bull and just stick him with the needle myself lol I was hoping Elena would do it like how she got emotional and hit Wood, lol like she did Hayden when he was shot and still trying go fight Hunt. I see Elena can get pretty violent when shes emotional...nice. Anyways as always reading this story is one of the highlights of my day, thank you!
Wood Wood Wood! I knew this was going to be brought up sooner or later, the fact that they could kill Hunt by killing Wood, well not killing him, but letting him die, but then Hunt would come back as an even more powerful demon. And now Elena has a time limit, I hope she figures out that double feat soon, maybe her Anya and Olivier can get together again and brainstorm, I love their chaste beauty team! Lol And now we have gotten closer to Jasper, you know the moment he hit Elena I was like, your dead to me. But now I don't know, well now hes been promoted to I don't want you to die, but its not like I'm gonna be broken up of you do. I know harsh, but hes gotta redeem himself to me after hitting her like that lol. And I knew Elena was going to find out more about him, I like how her curiousity gets the best of her at times lol and it shows just how stubborn she can be. Oh yeah and maybe she'll tell Olivier about the plan so she'll stay away from Wood for a bit. By the way I'm loving there interactions between Elena and Wood, not in a romantic way but a we've been through something terrible together so now we're closer, liked Elena and Hayden's friendship, their best friends. And oh my goodness Hayden! If I was their I would've been like cut the bull and just stick him with the needle myself lol I was hoping Elena would do it like how she got emotional and hit Wood, lol like she did Hayden when he was shot and still trying go fight Hunt. I see Elena can get pretty violent when shes emotional...nice. Anyways as always reading this story is one of the highlights of my day, thank you!