
2/7/2013 c1
1Englishman22
Beautifly written and superb descriptive language.
It takes in three concepts amazingly well; trust, between family members. Jealously, that turns to hate and neglet. And fear, fear of being mocked and bullied everyday for something you can't help. Maybe i'm exagerating but this is amazing. i'd count this among my favourite short stories on this site. It has badman stamp of recognition and recomendation. READ IT READ IT. I can honestly say I struggle to pick out errors on this.

Beautifly written and superb descriptive language.
It takes in three concepts amazingly well; trust, between family members. Jealously, that turns to hate and neglet. And fear, fear of being mocked and bullied everyday for something you can't help. Maybe i'm exagerating but this is amazing. i'd count this among my favourite short stories on this site. It has badman stamp of recognition and recomendation. READ IT READ IT. I can honestly say I struggle to pick out errors on this.