for The Final Victor1/27/2015 c1 
2Juniper Adler
I loved it! I wish you had extended this into a longer story because I feel like there's so much more we could rad about!
2Juniper AdlerI loved it! I wish you had extended this into a longer story because I feel like there's so much more we could rad about!
2/19/2013 c1 Wavern16 'Inactive
lol I'm betting you did great on the assignment! Great job buddy! Really angsty!
lol I'm betting you did great on the assignment! Great job buddy! Really angsty!
2/14/2013 c1 DeleteMeInactiveAccount
Very powerful final line.
Can't really think of much useful critique except that this story hurt me so that's a job well done. And I didn't notice any tense mistakes.
If this is the sort of thing you write for your class, then please do post more.
Very powerful final line.
Can't really think of much useful critique except that this story hurt me so that's a job well done. And I didn't notice any tense mistakes.
If this is the sort of thing you write for your class, then please do post more.
2/11/2013 c1 No Need To Argue
I loved it! Your writing style's very appealing. To me this felt very personal since my best friend past away exactly six months ago. I consider myself lucky I've never seen him in such a state.
I loved it! Your writing style's very appealing. To me this felt very personal since my best friend past away exactly six months ago. I consider myself lucky I've never seen him in such a state.