for Falling2/14/2013 c1 Celestial Rose
This poem initially made me think of the dream like state a lot of people experience when falling IN love, I like how you let it shift from dreamy to anxious as it becomes clear you're actually referring to the opposite feeling. I'll say it again, you're really good at capturing something's essence!
This poem initially made me think of the dream like state a lot of people experience when falling IN love, I like how you let it shift from dreamy to anxious as it becomes clear you're actually referring to the opposite feeling. I'll say it again, you're really good at capturing something's essence!