8/27/2010 c9 2bubublacz
Aw... I love the story! One worth to be read over and over again! Sweet and short just seems to be enough! Although I was a bit disappointed at the end, how Michael didn't really react with what happened and the fact that Chris accepted his proposal immediately, but then again I don't want to read the fuss and blah. blah. blah. So overall, you did a good job!
Aw... I love the story! One worth to be read over and over again! Sweet and short just seems to be enough! Although I was a bit disappointed at the end, how Michael didn't really react with what happened and the fact that Chris accepted his proposal immediately, but then again I don't want to read the fuss and blah. blah. blah. So overall, you did a good job!
5/17/2010 c9 12blackberry33
hi! so I know you wrote this quite a while ago but I wanted to let you know i found it today and read it all and loved it very much! wonderful writing, some grammatical mistakes at times and a little confusing order of words but otherwise, i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. i actually cried at the part when michael finally was able to see jason :) anyway, great stuff!
hi! so I know you wrote this quite a while ago but I wanted to let you know i found it today and read it all and loved it very much! wonderful writing, some grammatical mistakes at times and a little confusing order of words but otherwise, i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. i actually cried at the part when michael finally was able to see jason :) anyway, great stuff!
8/15/2009 c9 1SNB
That was a good story! I was surprised by how much I liked it. You did a great job!
That was a good story! I was surprised by how much I liked it. You did a great job!
8/25/2008 c9 2BleedingTwilight
This is a really beautiful story, and I'm glad I found it. It was very touching!
This is a really beautiful story, and I'm glad I found it. It was very touching!
6/13/2007 c9 4boredshitless
wow, that was a great story, though i think you could have worked more on them developing their feelings or else everything was perfect
wow, that was a great story, though i think you could have worked more on them developing their feelings or else everything was perfect
5/13/2007 c9 Marie
I really love your story. You've written it so well.
I really love your story. You've written it so well.
8/25/2006 c9 Montana-black-rose
Wow. This was amazing. I've read it twice, and been quoting you all over my school note-books this entire year (hope you don't mind), and I still can't get enough of it. Just a-m-a-z-i-n-g.
Montana XO
Wow. This was amazing. I've read it twice, and been quoting you all over my school note-books this entire year (hope you don't mind), and I still can't get enough of it. Just a-m-a-z-i-n-g.
Montana XO
1/17/2006 c9 Funtime2006-2008
Really good story. I really like it. Amazing as it is. I don't know what to say beside it's only hell of a story, or heaven. ^^Have a nice day!
Really good story. I really like it. Amazing as it is. I don't know what to say beside it's only hell of a story, or heaven. ^^Have a nice day!
7/30/2005 c9 3Dreams of the Heart
This is a beautiful story. It left me with a contented feeling after reading it. I feel that the story became more detailed and in depth towards the end. If the whole story was as in depth as the end then I think it would be improved, though not by much. Still a wonderful story/idea and well written.
This is a beautiful story. It left me with a contented feeling after reading it. I feel that the story became more detailed and in depth towards the end. If the whole story was as in depth as the end then I think it would be improved, though not by much. Still a wonderful story/idea and well written.
7/28/2005 c9 B.T. Lines
Wow. I loved that story. You are an excellent writer. I like the way you write in the intimate scenes but don't give us all the naughty details. I appreciate a good "clean" story.
Wow. I loved that story. You are an excellent writer. I like the way you write in the intimate scenes but don't give us all the naughty details. I appreciate a good "clean" story.
7/4/2005 c9 2Rose Jameson
I really enjoyed reading your story! It was really good thank you for writting it!
I really enjoyed reading your story! It was really good thank you for writting it!