for The Boy With The Magical Spoon5/14/2013 c1 
24ForeverSunshine80083
Awwww, that's so sweet! Now, excuse me while I go searching for a brass spoon in my woods... Hehehe!
XD I love your writing style! It's descriptive, lively and charming. You have a way with words that really pulls me into your work! I like the part about the "ravens on bread."
The story was very bittersweet. With love and loss. Can't wait to read more of your work!
ForeverSunshine80083
24ForeverSunshine80083Awwww, that's so sweet! Now, excuse me while I go searching for a brass spoon in my woods... Hehehe!
XD I love your writing style! It's descriptive, lively and charming. You have a way with words that really pulls me into your work! I like the part about the "ravens on bread."
The story was very bittersweet. With love and loss. Can't wait to read more of your work!
ForeverSunshine80083
3/11/2013 c1 nyaikou
A good story, I believe though that you may need to proofread and check your grammar. A bit weird how he gets a genie in a spoon instead of a lamp, a bit comical as well!
A good story, I believe though that you may need to proofread and check your grammar. A bit weird how he gets a genie in a spoon instead of a lamp, a bit comical as well!