for MORE THAN MAN , MORE THAN WOLF3/1/2013 c1 
5Author-K-J-Lee
Hey, I think you weave an interesting story it's just that the formatting lets you down a bit. There's line breaks where there shouldn't be and missing speech marks here and there. I wish you luck with your story, have fun with your writing :)
Cliche.
5Author-K-J-LeeHey, I think you weave an interesting story it's just that the formatting lets you down a bit. There's line breaks where there shouldn't be and missing speech marks here and there. I wish you luck with your story, have fun with your writing :)
Cliche.
2/23/2013 c5 1Exsomnis
It's a unique idea, not one I've seen before. The story is good, and I would like to see it continued-I'm especially curious about the aliens. However I do think it could use a bit more fleshing out, adding more detail and such to slow down the pace somewhat, because it seems a bit rushed. The scene where he's forgiving everyone seems slightly unrealistic because of this.
(And I think I might've mentioned it before, but have you considered getting a beta to help with those little errors of spelling and such?)
1ExsomnisIt's a unique idea, not one I've seen before. The story is good, and I would like to see it continued-I'm especially curious about the aliens. However I do think it could use a bit more fleshing out, adding more detail and such to slow down the pace somewhat, because it seems a bit rushed. The scene where he's forgiving everyone seems slightly unrealistic because of this.
(And I think I might've mentioned it before, but have you considered getting a beta to help with those little errors of spelling and such?)
2/20/2013 c1 Guest
Like where this is going, hope to read more
Like where this is going, hope to read more