1/7/2014 c1 3WritesForever
Awww that was sweet. I feel ya about the Valentine's Day thing, too. Lil annoying when all you see is lovers everywhere. Ugh. Anyways... great chapter. Loved it. :)
Awww that was sweet. I feel ya about the Valentine's Day thing, too. Lil annoying when all you see is lovers everywhere. Ugh. Anyways... great chapter. Loved it. :)
8/10/2013 c1 6From0the0Ashes
Aww, this was so cute. It made me smile and laugh. I like your writing style, too. Thanks for this.
Aww, this was so cute. It made me smile and laugh. I like your writing style, too. Thanks for this.
2/21/2013 c1 32The Siege
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE :DDDDD
Wyriss is a really interesting name. I like it. ;)
There are some errors that I'm too lazy to point out here but there's one HUGE thing I must mention: after the line break, your POV changes from third to first to third. D: GAH! So yeah, if you just fix that and then go through and check spelling and stuff, this will be perfect. Can't wait to read more of your stuff! Thanks again for reading mine!
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE :DDDDD
Wyriss is a really interesting name. I like it. ;)
There are some errors that I'm too lazy to point out here but there's one HUGE thing I must mention: after the line break, your POV changes from third to first to third. D: GAH! So yeah, if you just fix that and then go through and check spelling and stuff, this will be perfect. Can't wait to read more of your stuff! Thanks again for reading mine!
2/21/2013 c1 bs13
That was HILARIOUS. It is seldom when I favorite a completed work, but this is worth it!
Seriously, it was fluffy! Descriptive too. I felt like I could feel the emtion from the characters. Amazing.
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"I cry, just a little..."
That was HILARIOUS. It is seldom when I favorite a completed work, but this is worth it!
Seriously, it was fluffy! Descriptive too. I felt like I could feel the emtion from the characters. Amazing.
-bs13-
"I cry, just a little..."
2/20/2013 c1 2astoryleftalone
I loved this! Ahhh it was so cute and I know what you mean feeling like crap! This made my night a bit better :)
I loved this! Ahhh it was so cute and I know what you mean feeling like crap! This made my night a bit better :)