for Flight6/3/2003 c1 Sarana
This was just as wonderful as the first! Actually, I probably liked it better, just because this one had less blood. Your way with words is incredible! I especially liked the last paragraph. It was so sweet! Again, you used a couple slang terms, such as 'gonna' which distract from the writing. Anyway, I thought it was fantastic!
This was just as wonderful as the first! Actually, I probably liked it better, just because this one had less blood. Your way with words is incredible! I especially liked the last paragraph. It was so sweet! Again, you used a couple slang terms, such as 'gonna' which distract from the writing. Anyway, I thought it was fantastic!
6/10/2001 c1 
11METMA Mandy
Awww... that is SO sweet. I love the imagery and symbolism. You're a great writer... keep at it!
11METMA MandyAwww... that is SO sweet. I love the imagery and symbolism. You're a great writer... keep at it!