
4/12/2013 c1
12BangxDitto
I love this!
The opening line alone made me connect instantly.
I've been in this place so I can relate; you described it
so well.

I love this!
The opening line alone made me connect instantly.
I've been in this place so I can relate; you described it
so well.
3/3/2013 c1
167nickyO
I like the polite restraint about this poem. It adds to the sentiment, of wanting to be close but holding oneself off and of respecting another's feelings. Well done.

I like the polite restraint about this poem. It adds to the sentiment, of wanting to be close but holding oneself off and of respecting another's feelings. Well done.
3/2/2013 c1 Ame Minazuki
Uwaahhh!
keep it up..
I like the flow and yeah, I reminisce my past again because of this.
:)
Uwaahhh!
keep it up..
I like the flow and yeah, I reminisce my past again because of this.
:)
3/1/2013 c1 Punslinger
This is so achingly beautiful that even the sad longing
it causes is strangely uplifting. You have a gift for
making us want to come back for one more heartbreak.
This is so achingly beautiful that even the sad longing
it causes is strangely uplifting. You have a gift for
making us want to come back for one more heartbreak.
3/1/2013 c1 Kati
Hi Twin!
This is really sweet. You seem sad, I hope you're doing well. Very nice imagery!
Hugs!
Kati :)
Hi Twin!
This is really sweet. You seem sad, I hope you're doing well. Very nice imagery!
Hugs!
Kati :)