for Monsters in pretty pink3/10/2013 c1 
16One Last Note
Excellent use of imagery and rhyming. The rhythm is great as well. It could do with a better structure though. I find little else to critique on this poem and that's really rare! I really like this and I hope to read more of your poems in the future!
16One Last NoteExcellent use of imagery and rhyming. The rhythm is great as well. It could do with a better structure though. I find little else to critique on this poem and that's really rare! I really like this and I hope to read more of your poems in the future!