for The Bounty Hunter4/25/2021 c1 lloyd388
I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
5/2/2019 c7 Purplecat
I sure enjoyed the story, all seven chapters. Really too bad that there isn't more because it was quite good.
Thank you for writing.
I sure enjoyed the story, all seven chapters. Really too bad that there isn't more because it was quite good.
Thank you for writing.
7/17/2014 c1 
1nelso555
Wow, this story is amazing! I think the themes, characters, and plot so far have been really well done.
That whole scenario with the milk was hilarious and was an awesome start to the story. "Is there something wrong with milk, sir?" Haha, I also like the way your bounty hunters acts and talks.
You should work on your expression a little more. I found a few odd instances with grammar and stuff; a capital letter in the wrong place, full stops and all that.
But I do really like this story so far and I look forward to reading the rest of it. I'd also appreciate it if you take a look at some of my stories.
Anyway, keep writing.
- MN
1nelso555Wow, this story is amazing! I think the themes, characters, and plot so far have been really well done.
That whole scenario with the milk was hilarious and was an awesome start to the story. "Is there something wrong with milk, sir?" Haha, I also like the way your bounty hunters acts and talks.
You should work on your expression a little more. I found a few odd instances with grammar and stuff; a capital letter in the wrong place, full stops and all that.
But I do really like this story so far and I look forward to reading the rest of it. I'd also appreciate it if you take a look at some of my stories.
Anyway, keep writing.
- MN
8/26/2013 c6 4Lolitroy
Hahaha, I too want to punch Avery for being so uncooperative, but oh well. Hope they convince her next chapter.
Finally updated! Man Iim so happy this wasn't discontinued haha -w-'
4LolitroyHahaha, I too want to punch Avery for being so uncooperative, but oh well. Hope they convince her next chapter.
Finally updated! Man Iim so happy this wasn't discontinued haha -w-'
5/18/2013 c5 Lolitroy
I liked the paragraphs about how the Bounty Hunter sleeps with his gun, because it gives us a bit of information about his way of thinking. Really liked it.
But then I got confused. I felt like there were many characters in a short time and didn't really get anything until I reread. Did they appear before? And who is the redhead?
Okay, maybe that, you're leaving as a mystery, which is good because it makes me want to read more.
I think the ending was kind of weird. The Bounty Hunter started talking? Alright...
Overall, it was a good chapter. Nice suspense when he hears the noise. I started drumming my fingers on the desk because I wanted to know when the dudes were going to appear, haha.
Didya notice I now give real reviews? :3
Expect more of it, mwahaha.
I liked the paragraphs about how the Bounty Hunter sleeps with his gun, because it gives us a bit of information about his way of thinking. Really liked it.
But then I got confused. I felt like there were many characters in a short time and didn't really get anything until I reread. Did they appear before? And who is the redhead?
Okay, maybe that, you're leaving as a mystery, which is good because it makes me want to read more.
I think the ending was kind of weird. The Bounty Hunter started talking? Alright...
Overall, it was a good chapter. Nice suspense when he hears the noise. I started drumming my fingers on the desk because I wanted to know when the dudes were going to appear, haha.
Didya notice I now give real reviews? :3
Expect more of it, mwahaha.
4/11/2013 c4 Lolitroy
He drinks milk in a bar ahaha the Bounty Hunter is awesome.
I like how you narrate. It makes the atmosphere all westerny. If you get it.
I also liked the cliffhanger at the end. Because at first I thought it would be a filler chapter.
So far, so good. I'll be waiting for an update!
He drinks milk in a bar ahaha the Bounty Hunter is awesome.
I like how you narrate. It makes the atmosphere all westerny. If you get it.
I also liked the cliffhanger at the end. Because at first I thought it would be a filler chapter.
So far, so good. I'll be waiting for an update!
3/14/2013 c2 Lolitroy
Stanley is an awesome character. I like him. Except when he killed the poor teddy bear. I wanna see more of Lewis :D
Stanley is an awesome character. I like him. Except when he killed the poor teddy bear. I wanna see more of Lewis :D
3/14/2013 c1 Lolitroy
Hmm. My first western story. I really liked the beginning :D
The bounty hunter is awesome! The scene with the bartender was funny. Thought I never knew what his name was. Eh.
Hmm. My first western story. I really liked the beginning :D
The bounty hunter is awesome! The scene with the bartender was funny. Thought I never knew what his name was. Eh.