for The Dragon's Dagger4/19/2014 c2 
4TheAlabasterPhoenyx
This is a really good start, even though I'm not quite sure where it would be going. But thanks for keeping it up here - it's an interesting world.
4TheAlabasterPhoenyxThis is a really good start, even though I'm not quite sure where it would be going. But thanks for keeping it up here - it's an interesting world.
7/9/2013 c2 1XDXP
This was pretty good!
I don't really understand whats up with the dagger, and I'm guessing you're going to bring it up again somewhere. Maybe connect it with the fox?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
1XDXPThis was pretty good!
I don't really understand whats up with the dagger, and I'm guessing you're going to bring it up again somewhere. Maybe connect it with the fox?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
6/4/2013 c2 3potentialoverlord
i really like your story so far. keep writing. and sorry for the short review, i promise to make a longer one next time
3potentialoverlordi really like your story so far. keep writing. and sorry for the short review, i promise to make a longer one next time
3/18/2013 c1 3XAbsoluteZeroX
So...tired! But I finished lol. I think my fav part was when they were fighting in their animal forms. It was very clear and precise, and I dunno about anyone else, but I love envisioning animal fights xD especially awesome animals like wolves/panthers lol xD so good job!
Look forward to more soon!
Zero
3XAbsoluteZeroXSo...tired! But I finished lol. I think my fav part was when they were fighting in their animal forms. It was very clear and precise, and I dunno about anyone else, but I love envisioning animal fights xD especially awesome animals like wolves/panthers lol xD so good job!
Look forward to more soon!
Zero