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7/16/2015 c1 43LuckycoolHawk9
I really liked all the imagery in this piece because it gives us a sense of what happened on this day without the narrator brushing it over like it was nothing. I also really liked the opening because it shows how he/she has become damaged and lost all hope in the world for things and it's quite beautiful and tragic. I also loved the ending because it is indeed tragic showing how the narrator has hope, but also had lost it. My only complaint is this piece is too short mostly because we learn nothing about who this character was, except a human.
6/16/2013 c1 5KH.Lee
i quite like this.
i like your style.
your way with handling descriptions really makes for an interesting read.
i'd love to read more of your work!
its a shame more people who have viewed this haven't reviewed... it's about 3-4 years since i've been back on fictionpress and the people seem to be more of a "read and alert" rather than the "read and review" from 2006-2009

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