for Hurt4/1/2013 c1 JWT
She is a bigger person than I am. I would not have forgiven him. And if I were, Katie, and if Katie is really her best friend, I would have broken Keith's nose rather than ask her to sit with him.
From a literary point of view, I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes, so if there are any then you succeeded in sucking me into the emotion deeply enough that I did not notice. Either way, congratulations.
She is a bigger person than I am. I would not have forgiven him. And if I were, Katie, and if Katie is really her best friend, I would have broken Keith's nose rather than ask her to sit with him.
From a literary point of view, I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes, so if there are any then you succeeded in sucking me into the emotion deeply enough that I did not notice. Either way, congratulations.
3/17/2013 c1 
3myheart4you
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Thank goodness. Finally, a story with bullying that isn't cliche. Finally, someone who actually makes me feel bad for the main character. It's about time.
Seriously, that guy is an ass. What's his problem? Why would you do that to someone? I hate him.
Yeah. I knew some girls that were the "what would you do if you got asked out" type. They're not very nice, and all I can say, is thank goodness I'm not in middle school anymore.
Great story!
3myheart4you:(
Thank goodness. Finally, a story with bullying that isn't cliche. Finally, someone who actually makes me feel bad for the main character. It's about time.
Seriously, that guy is an ass. What's his problem? Why would you do that to someone? I hate him.
Yeah. I knew some girls that were the "what would you do if you got asked out" type. They're not very nice, and all I can say, is thank goodness I'm not in middle school anymore.
Great story!
3/17/2013 c1 29Lilium Genus
I haven't met you, maybe I never will, but I love you.
I was never pretty (still hasn't changed) and They always made me cry, too. I let them win in a way when I began to hurt myself in high school. I'm a completely different person now; time and love and friends have shaped me for the better.
Not everyone is so cruel. I just want you to know that I love you, little rabbit.
29Lilium GenusI haven't met you, maybe I never will, but I love you.
I was never pretty (still hasn't changed) and They always made me cry, too. I let them win in a way when I began to hurt myself in high school. I'm a completely different person now; time and love and friends have shaped me for the better.
Not everyone is so cruel. I just want you to know that I love you, little rabbit.