for Scent of a Mother3/21/2013 c1 
88Austin F
Very good story! Much better on the descriptions, more showing than telling which is always a good thing. I did find a mistake though. Near the end you have 'fin him on his back' instead of find.
88Austin FVery good story! Much better on the descriptions, more showing than telling which is always a good thing. I did find a mistake though. Near the end you have 'fin him on his back' instead of find.
3/21/2013 c1 1CaityLightning
Maybe something wrong with me.. but I found the ending funny XD awesome, wonderful, fantastic, lovely story! :D you are am amazing writer! I hope to see more of your work!
1CaityLightningMaybe something wrong with me.. but I found the ending funny XD awesome, wonderful, fantastic, lovely story! :D you are am amazing writer! I hope to see more of your work!