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3/21/2013 c1 88Austin F
Very good story! Much better on the descriptions, more showing than telling which is always a good thing. I did find a mistake though. Near the end you have 'fin him on his back' instead of find.
3/21/2013 c1 1CaityLightning
Maybe something wrong with me.. but I found the ending funny XD awesome, wonderful, fantastic, lovely story! :D you are am amazing writer! I hope to see more of your work!

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