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for Friendship day

8/3/2014 c1 Akrur Khetan
Happy belated friendship day
3/26/2013 c1 Guest
Sweet, I love it.
3/21/2013 c1 15Petra Arkanian
A very well-written anecdote. Fun read
3/21/2013 c1 Sleepy Cat
A very cute story my friend. ;)

That's cool that your class did that for the boy, and shows even with younger kids who are always stereotyped as kind of greedy, there is still kindness within the group. I didn't even know this Friendship Day existed though to be honest. XD

Congratulations on getting this published too! You deserve it! :D

While I can't necessarily say I relate to friendship like this the best, this story was cute and inspiring. Short...but cute.

One thing I do recommend though is that you capitalize the 'day' in the title, for that's how it is supposed to be. XD

Other than that, good job! :3
3/21/2013 c1 88Austin F
This is a nice essay that delivers a strong message. I did catch something, 'a simple gesture made such a lot of difference' doesn't really sound right, 'made such a huge difference' maybe? I really enjoy the meaning of the essay.

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