
10/7/2012 c1
7Wingsoflinesia
Love it. Just love it. This is amazeing. I like how loyal the cat is. And that's an interesting name...like that too!

Love it. Just love it. This is amazeing. I like how loyal the cat is. And that's an interesting name...like that too!
6/29/2005 c1 vinegar-affliction
This is one of the best works of fiction I have yet to find. I cried a tear or two, and thanks for it.
This is one of the best works of fiction I have yet to find. I cried a tear or two, and thanks for it.
4/20/2005 c1
35Vestigial Account
Continual delightful praise of cats. Some grammatical errors and missing words, but I still enjoyed it.

Continual delightful praise of cats. Some grammatical errors and missing words, but I still enjoyed it.
10/22/2004 c1
2Kitsuneko
*Claps* Very lovely story. Spooky, but kind of sweet. ^_^ I love cats, but my dad won't let me have one.
~Kitsuneko

*Claps* Very lovely story. Spooky, but kind of sweet. ^_^ I love cats, but my dad won't let me have one.
~Kitsuneko
7/20/2004 c1 LuthienLuin
One of my favorite short stories I've read here of all time! I love cats and this story was just too cool and fits together so perfectly! Definately going in faves!
-LuthienLuin
One of my favorite short stories I've read here of all time! I love cats and this story was just too cool and fits together so perfectly! Definately going in faves!
-LuthienLuin
4/20/2004 c1
35Blooming Phoenix
Aw :( thats so sad... A great story, you managed to convey so much by the ending, its a very short story, and it works on many levels. Its simple too and I really liked reading it. Its so true though, theres something odd and mystical about cats, the way they stare into you and show you all the love you could ever need. hey! speaking of which, my cat just jumped into my lap! hehe.. weird! Anyways, good work!

Aw :( thats so sad... A great story, you managed to convey so much by the ending, its a very short story, and it works on many levels. Its simple too and I really liked reading it. Its so true though, theres something odd and mystical about cats, the way they stare into you and show you all the love you could ever need. hey! speaking of which, my cat just jumped into my lap! hehe.. weird! Anyways, good work!
3/18/2004 c1 L.P.B
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! That was so sad! I'm going to scream if it wasn't night. Ah!
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L.P.B.
I love it so much!
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! That was so sad! I'm going to scream if it wasn't night. Ah!
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L.P.B.
I love it so much!
1/15/2004 c1
3EisoftheSnow
That was a most heart wrenching piece of work! Simply amazing! The story was so sweet, those poor cats. I love cats and i know how much it hurts to see one dead..one that you knew...

That was a most heart wrenching piece of work! Simply amazing! The story was so sweet, those poor cats. I love cats and i know how much it hurts to see one dead..one that you knew...
10/29/2003 c1
7Hopechest
Ever since I read the summary I’ve wanted to read this one, and finally I have the time to catch up on all my earmarked fictionpress stories. *dances*
I think I mentioned it before, but it’s worth repeating. English may not be your primary language, but you write in it very well, better, in fact, than most natives. I speeky da good engrish fur exampeel! *smile*
“My work timetable was rather unstable -I'm a RN- and so I took it one day at a time.”
I suggest not using abbreviations like “RN” without first using the whole word. Not everyone knows what it stands for, and even I had to pause.
“Form the same sources, he was suspected of having accelerated his wife death, which was sick with bone cancer.”
Typo. “From the same sources…” and “…who was sick…”
Other than those minor typos, it’s a lovely story.

Ever since I read the summary I’ve wanted to read this one, and finally I have the time to catch up on all my earmarked fictionpress stories. *dances*
I think I mentioned it before, but it’s worth repeating. English may not be your primary language, but you write in it very well, better, in fact, than most natives. I speeky da good engrish fur exampeel! *smile*
“My work timetable was rather unstable -I'm a RN- and so I took it one day at a time.”
I suggest not using abbreviations like “RN” without first using the whole word. Not everyone knows what it stands for, and even I had to pause.
“Form the same sources, he was suspected of having accelerated his wife death, which was sick with bone cancer.”
Typo. “From the same sources…” and “…who was sick…”
Other than those minor typos, it’s a lovely story.