for Beginner's Friday Nights5/13/2019 c20 knownassociate
You mention scrapping this chapter, I thought it important. Is it possible you are your own worst critic. The story just flows so smoothly and the characters so believable and interesting. You are very talented and I hope you choose to continue this story and many others.
You mention scrapping this chapter, I thought it important. Is it possible you are your own worst critic. The story just flows so smoothly and the characters so believable and interesting. You are very talented and I hope you choose to continue this story and many others.
10/8/2018 c28 A
One of the best stories I've read here. I loved all the description and the very adult and mature relationships of everyone. I learnt of so many things. So many dialogues. Very beautiful written. And the bond between and Ian and Will is so beautiful. Yih e done an excellent job ! I'm in love . ️
One of the best stories I've read here. I loved all the description and the very adult and mature relationships of everyone. I learnt of so many things. So many dialogues. Very beautiful written. And the bond between and Ian and Will is so beautiful. Yih e done an excellent job ! I'm in love . ️
9/15/2018 c28 chibikodo
Their delirious happiness feels like something is about to burst. Perhaps I have become too much of a cynic, but I am definitely waiting for the other shoe to drop. Not that I don't appreciate the expressions of love and joy, but there's gotta be something that is going to happen to bring them back to earth.
Their delirious happiness feels like something is about to burst. Perhaps I have become too much of a cynic, but I am definitely waiting for the other shoe to drop. Not that I don't appreciate the expressions of love and joy, but there's gotta be something that is going to happen to bring them back to earth.
11/29/2017 c27 Fart Face
Ah, yes, thank you! I almost forgot about poor Marin. Can't wait to find out how Will deals with the aftermath of his new found love. btw, I'll never be able to eat cereal again without thinking of eating ass lol
Ah, yes, thank you! I almost forgot about poor Marin. Can't wait to find out how Will deals with the aftermath of his new found love. btw, I'll never be able to eat cereal again without thinking of eating ass lol
11/28/2017 c27 chibikodo
Haha if you went with the other title it would have been hilarious but would have given the whole chapter away. Will seriously hasn't spoken to Marin about how they are going to cancel the wedding? That is going to cause some trouble later. Although, are Will and Ian still legally married?
The fluff in this chapter was definitely worth skipping getting necessary work done. 3
Haha if you went with the other title it would have been hilarious but would have given the whole chapter away. Will seriously hasn't spoken to Marin about how they are going to cancel the wedding? That is going to cause some trouble later. Although, are Will and Ian still legally married?
The fluff in this chapter was definitely worth skipping getting necessary work done. 3
11/25/2017 c26 Fart Face
Oops, I didn't mean to post my last review as guest. I'm sorry for all the crap you've had to go through. It's hard to wish away the past because that's what has made us who we are today. And it's probably what helped you write this story. (which I love!) Wishing you a hopeful future.
Oops, I didn't mean to post my last review as guest. I'm sorry for all the crap you've had to go through. It's hard to wish away the past because that's what has made us who we are today. And it's probably what helped you write this story. (which I love!) Wishing you a hopeful future.
11/25/2017 c26 Guest
Thank you for the update. And for pouring yourself into it. Writing can be so cathartic. I hope it helped you. I have enjoyed this story so much.
Thank you for the update. And for pouring yourself into it. Writing can be so cathartic. I hope it helped you. I have enjoyed this story so much.
11/25/2017 c26 happy
I've been reading Beginner's Friday Nights for the past few days and, knowing the familiar sense of impending doom that came with the "Incomplete" tag as I neared Chapter 25, deliberately slowed myself down through the last few chapters. I know writers have to pour in an incredible amount of time, heart, and soul into each work-all while wrangling with Real Life, no less-so I was planning to enjoy the ride while it last. I've also experienced enough heartbreak here on FP to know how to mentally prepare for Chapter 25's end with no promise of update, but... lo and behold! Imagine the ecstasy I felt when I found that the "Next" button still worked, and that you'd updated a Chapter 26 sometime between now and the last time somebody had pried my away from my laptop.
I understand there'll still be some waiting before the next update, but I'm happy just hearing that you're alive and well. And, man... I'm in love your story. It's a monster of a work-you're nearing 300,000-and something I honestly never expected to become so attached to. I've enjoyed every bit of researched cultural background you've woven in-be it Mexican, Jew, LGBT, or even bondage (heh), they add life and depth to your story and your characters. And god, your characters. Although I couldn't be more different from them in terms of station or point in life, I connected with them better than... highly polarized magnets? Forgive the crappy metaphor-you're the writer here, not me. I'm just at a very confused, very lost place right now, and in that way, my heart squeezes in empathy every time I imagine Will taking a long walk through the forest. And equally so, your characters have made me laugh countless times and smile more (the dance class gang is ah-mazing and I'm so happy for Ian and Will).
I've also been searching up some of the music you've mentioned. Thank you so so much for introducing me to Olafur Arnalds and many others-they've been playing on repeat ever since.
And, of course, thank *you*. For not only this wonderful little story, but also for the moments of life you share in your notes and for your love towards the children in need. Both you and your work have made me think-really think-about some of the more difficult hurdles in life. Perhaps a bit dramatic, haha, and I realize that this has strayed from a "review" to something more akin to a love letter, but I don't want to downplay the praise you deserve.
From an anonymous reader who could be down the block or halfway across the world, I wish the best for you. *clinks glass*
I've been reading Beginner's Friday Nights for the past few days and, knowing the familiar sense of impending doom that came with the "Incomplete" tag as I neared Chapter 25, deliberately slowed myself down through the last few chapters. I know writers have to pour in an incredible amount of time, heart, and soul into each work-all while wrangling with Real Life, no less-so I was planning to enjoy the ride while it last. I've also experienced enough heartbreak here on FP to know how to mentally prepare for Chapter 25's end with no promise of update, but... lo and behold! Imagine the ecstasy I felt when I found that the "Next" button still worked, and that you'd updated a Chapter 26 sometime between now and the last time somebody had pried my away from my laptop.
I understand there'll still be some waiting before the next update, but I'm happy just hearing that you're alive and well. And, man... I'm in love your story. It's a monster of a work-you're nearing 300,000-and something I honestly never expected to become so attached to. I've enjoyed every bit of researched cultural background you've woven in-be it Mexican, Jew, LGBT, or even bondage (heh), they add life and depth to your story and your characters. And god, your characters. Although I couldn't be more different from them in terms of station or point in life, I connected with them better than... highly polarized magnets? Forgive the crappy metaphor-you're the writer here, not me. I'm just at a very confused, very lost place right now, and in that way, my heart squeezes in empathy every time I imagine Will taking a long walk through the forest. And equally so, your characters have made me laugh countless times and smile more (the dance class gang is ah-mazing and I'm so happy for Ian and Will).
I've also been searching up some of the music you've mentioned. Thank you so so much for introducing me to Olafur Arnalds and many others-they've been playing on repeat ever since.
And, of course, thank *you*. For not only this wonderful little story, but also for the moments of life you share in your notes and for your love towards the children in need. Both you and your work have made me think-really think-about some of the more difficult hurdles in life. Perhaps a bit dramatic, haha, and I realize that this has strayed from a "review" to something more akin to a love letter, but I don't want to downplay the praise you deserve.
From an anonymous reader who could be down the block or halfway across the world, I wish the best for you. *clinks glass*
11/25/2017 c26 chibikodo
After all the craziness life has thrown atyou, I am so glad your mom is OK. It's thoughtful of you for even thinking of us when you son't owe us readers anything.
Learning more about Will's backstory, it really helps explain why Will was so adamant about making things work with Marin, and about not being in love with Ian. But i am glad things have come full circle because they belong together. :)
After all the craziness life has thrown atyou, I am so glad your mom is OK. It's thoughtful of you for even thinking of us when you son't owe us readers anything.
Learning more about Will's backstory, it really helps explain why Will was so adamant about making things work with Marin, and about not being in love with Ian. But i am glad things have come full circle because they belong together. :)
11/22/2016 c25 chibikodo
Will's reaction after sex is entertaining, like a weight was lifted off his shoulders and his realization everything will be OK makes him ridiculously silly and giddy.
Thank you for updating. Every time I get an email about an update I get super excited. You definitely don't disappoint. :)
Will's reaction after sex is entertaining, like a weight was lifted off his shoulders and his realization everything will be OK makes him ridiculously silly and giddy.
Thank you for updating. Every time I get an email about an update I get super excited. You definitely don't disappoint. :)
11/21/2016 c25 Fart Face
Yay! It's about time. Please don't let Will hurt Ian. I don't think either one of us could take it lol
Yay! It's about time. Please don't let Will hurt Ian. I don't think either one of us could take it lol
9/4/2016 c24 Guest
so good :)
so good :)
8/21/2016 c24 Fart Face
Boy, I've missed this story. I enjoyed the peek into their cultural lives. Will said a lot more prayers than we do. No wonder we run out of words before the last candles are lit on the last few nights! lol I sure hope for Ian's (and your reader's) sake, Will doesn't back off again. Congratulations on your puppy rescue. It's such a good-hearted thing to do. And I love the name. Looking forward to the next chapter anxiously!
Boy, I've missed this story. I enjoyed the peek into their cultural lives. Will said a lot more prayers than we do. No wonder we run out of words before the last candles are lit on the last few nights! lol I sure hope for Ian's (and your reader's) sake, Will doesn't back off again. Congratulations on your puppy rescue. It's such a good-hearted thing to do. And I love the name. Looking forward to the next chapter anxiously!
8/21/2016 c1 Guest
Are you hating on jazz?
Are you hating on jazz?