for Beginner's Friday Nights6/18/2015 c19 chibikodo
Not sure about everyone else but I enjoy this story for what it is though Will's obstinence is starting to drive me crazy. Obviously nowhere nearly as bad as it does Ian.
Also Dylan is a cool kid. I am glad he isnwilling to open up and talk about his difficulties with a stranger. He's not far off in saying Will is in the closet, although I think it's more denial about his feelings for Ian. I think Will is more pansexual than bi, with a strong Ian fixation.
Thanks for posing this update. I look forward to their dinner and the divorce papers being brought up.. and Ibreally hope Marin
Not sure about everyone else but I enjoy this story for what it is though Will's obstinence is starting to drive me crazy. Obviously nowhere nearly as bad as it does Ian.
Also Dylan is a cool kid. I am glad he isnwilling to open up and talk about his difficulties with a stranger. He's not far off in saying Will is in the closet, although I think it's more denial about his feelings for Ian. I think Will is more pansexual than bi, with a strong Ian fixation.
Thanks for posing this update. I look forward to their dinner and the divorce papers being brought up.. and Ibreally hope Marin
5/15/2015 c1 LittleDeadFly
I really wanted to like this, but I was distracted by the insane amount of unnecessary speech tags scatted throughout the text. 'Said' is a lot less distracting.
I really wanted to like this, but I was distracted by the insane amount of unnecessary speech tags scatted throughout the text. 'Said' is a lot less distracting.
4/5/2015 c18 myself
I just want to say that I'm oh so glad I found your story, it's so good! You got yourself a Portuguese fan here, keep up with the excellent work! D
I just want to say that I'm oh so glad I found your story, it's so good! You got yourself a Portuguese fan here, keep up with the excellent work! D
3/25/2015 c18 chibikodo
First. The Wreck Room sounds amazing!
Second, I hope Marin has a happy ending...
But that said. Will admitting how important Ian is to him, forgiving his father, spilling the truth to Marin.. and then Ian's dream!
Something big is going to happen in the next chapter?
Their friends are such dweebs. Ordering those drinks and June's story.. Hilarious.
First. The Wreck Room sounds amazing!
Second, I hope Marin has a happy ending...
But that said. Will admitting how important Ian is to him, forgiving his father, spilling the truth to Marin.. and then Ian's dream!
Something big is going to happen in the next chapter?
Their friends are such dweebs. Ordering those drinks and June's story.. Hilarious.
3/25/2015 c18 
23plumblossom
I've been enjoying this story for a long time, but the priapism story threw me right out. I thought she had to be lying about the masturbation treatment, but I had to go research it. Of course she was.
After that, I just couldn't read on. I'll come back to it most likely.
23plumblossomI've been enjoying this story for a long time, but the priapism story threw me right out. I thought she had to be lying about the masturbation treatment, but I had to go research it. Of course she was.
After that, I just couldn't read on. I'll come back to it most likely.
3/19/2015 c17 Fart Face
What an emotional chapter. I wish I couldn't relate to so much of it. lol. I have to say, I didn't like Ian calling Christian, and missing him so much. I hope Will realizes what they could have before it's too late. His cryptic words to his mother could mean anything, but I'm holding out for a revelation about Ian. And I'm dying to know the story behind Jeremy. Keep 'em coming!
What an emotional chapter. I wish I couldn't relate to so much of it. lol. I have to say, I didn't like Ian calling Christian, and missing him so much. I hope Will realizes what they could have before it's too late. His cryptic words to his mother could mean anything, but I'm holding out for a revelation about Ian. And I'm dying to know the story behind Jeremy. Keep 'em coming!
3/18/2015 c17 chibikodo
:) Deb sounds like a good nom, doing the best that she could for Will and his sister.
It's time for Will to realize that he doesn't want to conti ue with the life he's had because it's really not what he wants.. just what he expects himself to want. And Marin has no idea..
Ian and Christian's relationship I still can't fathom.
:) Deb sounds like a good nom, doing the best that she could for Will and his sister.
It's time for Will to realize that he doesn't want to conti ue with the life he's had because it's really not what he wants.. just what he expects himself to want. And Marin has no idea..
Ian and Christian's relationship I still can't fathom.
3/18/2015 c17 Guest
How do you do it? Yet again you had me blubbing like a baby. Amazing.
How do you do it? Yet again you had me blubbing like a baby. Amazing.
2/26/2015 c16 3Astir-Lewis
One, I send my love out to you in a time like this, hopefully things get better. Second, excellent as always, I forgot how much I loved this story. Will and Ian are still wonderful characters.
3Astir-LewisOne, I send my love out to you in a time like this, hopefully things get better. Second, excellent as always, I forgot how much I loved this story. Will and Ian are still wonderful characters.
2/24/2015 c16 Amy B
God, i love this so much! I am really greatfull for you to Write this!
I was especially happy to see a new chapter up. I love it, please do keep it up!
God, i love this so much! I am really greatfull for you to Write this!
I was especially happy to see a new chapter up. I love it, please do keep it up!
2/24/2015 c16 chibikodo
Oops, there's no going back from that Will. You may love Marin but does she stir the same feelings in you that Ian does? If she meant the world to you.. you would have gone to her for comfort. for both your sakes Will, please set Marin free because she deserves to be happy too.
Ian's relationship with Christian is complicated.. so I am sure Christian won't be heartbroken to hear of emotional infidelity from Ian. Then again I may have his character wrong.
Thanks for the update!
Oops, there's no going back from that Will. You may love Marin but does she stir the same feelings in you that Ian does? If she meant the world to you.. you would have gone to her for comfort. for both your sakes Will, please set Marin free because she deserves to be happy too.
Ian's relationship with Christian is complicated.. so I am sure Christian won't be heartbroken to hear of emotional infidelity from Ian. Then again I may have his character wrong.
Thanks for the update!
2/24/2015 c16 Asha124
You are back! I have been checking for updates every day so this chapter made me very happy. I know that RL can be a bitch sometimes and I hope that everything will work out for you eventually. You have a rare talent for writing and it would be shame not to use it. :-)
You are back! I have been checking for updates every day so this chapter made me very happy. I know that RL can be a bitch sometimes and I hope that everything will work out for you eventually. You have a rare talent for writing and it would be shame not to use it. :-)
2/23/2015 c16 Fart Face
Yay! I've been waiting forever for this. I know how hard it can be to keep up on stories-life gets in the way. But I hope you'll continue. So looking forward to more :)
Yay! I've been waiting forever for this. I know how hard it can be to keep up on stories-life gets in the way. But I hope you'll continue. So looking forward to more :)
2/17/2015 c15 Guest
I must tell you i am in absolute awe of your talent. I read these chapters and i feel the sweetness and the pain of Will and Ians' love and longing and i BELIEVE. So much garbage happens in every life, regardless of wealth, talent, intelligence and looks. Sometimes it comes from bad luck, sometimes bad judgement. I've come to understand that there's no avoiding it. It's how we know we are still alive. If that sounds flippant or clique, then i am sorry, i don't mean it to be.
I see you haven't updated in a while. I sincerely hope you are ok. I hope you look in the mirror and see (amongst other things) a brilliant and funny and truly gifted writer and human being because that's what i always think when i read your words. I hope you 'come back' to us soon. I for one, really miss you and how your creations make me laugh and smile and cry a little bit and most of all, make me wish i could climb into the story and befriend these beautiful and loving and stupid and gorgeous and flawed people. Take care of yourself. X
I must tell you i am in absolute awe of your talent. I read these chapters and i feel the sweetness and the pain of Will and Ians' love and longing and i BELIEVE. So much garbage happens in every life, regardless of wealth, talent, intelligence and looks. Sometimes it comes from bad luck, sometimes bad judgement. I've come to understand that there's no avoiding it. It's how we know we are still alive. If that sounds flippant or clique, then i am sorry, i don't mean it to be.
I see you haven't updated in a while. I sincerely hope you are ok. I hope you look in the mirror and see (amongst other things) a brilliant and funny and truly gifted writer and human being because that's what i always think when i read your words. I hope you 'come back' to us soon. I for one, really miss you and how your creations make me laugh and smile and cry a little bit and most of all, make me wish i could climb into the story and befriend these beautiful and loving and stupid and gorgeous and flawed people. Take care of yourself. X
10/11/2014 c15 Dark Lynnette
I'm glad writing this is helping you heal.
Reading it is pretty relaxing for me and nice to see when I have time to check out my Story Alerts.
I'm still enjoying the pacing and the variety of characters and relationships in the story. The only place(s) that distract me are the really long paragraphs. On screen they look super long, but I'm sure in a book or an ereader they'd look regular sized. That's a seriously minor issue to bring up, but figured I would anyway.
I really like the small personality quirks each character has and love every time someone talks about modern feminism. This time Rosie the manager was a hoot! Loved her quirky, opinionated monologues.
Take your time putting out the next chapter and I hope you keep up your positive attitude in your real life.
I'm glad writing this is helping you heal.
Reading it is pretty relaxing for me and nice to see when I have time to check out my Story Alerts.
I'm still enjoying the pacing and the variety of characters and relationships in the story. The only place(s) that distract me are the really long paragraphs. On screen they look super long, but I'm sure in a book or an ereader they'd look regular sized. That's a seriously minor issue to bring up, but figured I would anyway.
I really like the small personality quirks each character has and love every time someone talks about modern feminism. This time Rosie the manager was a hoot! Loved her quirky, opinionated monologues.
Take your time putting out the next chapter and I hope you keep up your positive attitude in your real life.