for Beginner's Friday Nights3/26/2014 c13 InsanityAndBeyond
Two long chapters so soon after each other? You spoil us.
Ian and Christian relationship woes, and finding out through Will's naughty thoughts that they definitely had a very physical relationship. You spoil us too much!
Loved this chapter :)
Two long chapters so soon after each other? You spoil us.
Ian and Christian relationship woes, and finding out through Will's naughty thoughts that they definitely had a very physical relationship. You spoil us too much!
Loved this chapter :)
3/25/2014 c13 Hyaci
Very well written, deserves many more reviews. Will be back periodically to check on this.
Very well written, deserves many more reviews. Will be back periodically to check on this.
3/25/2014 c13 chibikodo
I'm glad that Christian decided to start the conversation with Ian because they definitely had their problems.
I'm surprised but kind of not with the last scene. So Will and Ian did do something together.
Oh and their friends are so entertaining. :)
I'm glad that Christian decided to start the conversation with Ian because they definitely had their problems.
I'm surprised but kind of not with the last scene. So Will and Ian did do something together.
Oh and their friends are so entertaining. :)
3/25/2014 c13 Fart Face
Ah, finally. A glimpse of what neither Will nor Ian are willing to talk about- their past. Perhaps their "wedding night"? I have to admit, though I do like the other characters, I was reading too quickly through them to get to Will, Ian and Christian. You had me for a minute there, but I'm glad Ian pulled away from their potential threesome. It was damn sexy though :)
Ah, finally. A glimpse of what neither Will nor Ian are willing to talk about- their past. Perhaps their "wedding night"? I have to admit, though I do like the other characters, I was reading too quickly through them to get to Will, Ian and Christian. You had me for a minute there, but I'm glad Ian pulled away from their potential threesome. It was damn sexy though :)
3/25/2014 c13 cetink24
OMG. This chapter was so good! I'm so glad Ian mentioned the whole threesome thing cause I was like was it just me who thought that was about to happen and can't wait to find out about these flashing images. Thanks so much for updating so quickly. it made my Day. C:
OMG. This chapter was so good! I'm so glad Ian mentioned the whole threesome thing cause I was like was it just me who thought that was about to happen and can't wait to find out about these flashing images. Thanks so much for updating so quickly. it made my Day. C:
3/22/2014 c12 chibikodo
Looking forward to the next part already! I'm sure Will's sister sees how Will loves Ian even though he himself hasn't even realize it yet. :)
Also- love the flashbacks! :) Ian's parents are adorable and seeing them welcome Will back was nice.
Marin's a lovely woman but not right for Will and he's not right for her. However her friends sound entertaining.
Looking forward to the next part already! I'm sure Will's sister sees how Will loves Ian even though he himself hasn't even realize it yet. :)
Also- love the flashbacks! :) Ian's parents are adorable and seeing them welcome Will back was nice.
Marin's a lovely woman but not right for Will and he's not right for her. However her friends sound entertaining.
3/21/2014 c12 cetink24
OMG. I love this story it's so Well written. I can't wait to see the romance unfold between Will and Ian (hopefully) . But anyway you write amazingly Well. can't wait for the next chapter.
OMG. I love this story it's so Well written. I can't wait to see the romance unfold between Will and Ian (hopefully) . But anyway you write amazingly Well. can't wait for the next chapter.
3/20/2014 c12 vcdwhite
you know... your way of writing never fails to amaze me... i'm looking forward to reading this up to its end... this story is really worth waiting :) i love how the story slowly builds up but with purpose and not just suddenly jumping to a climax... i love how you write about the main characters' relationship. You give an idea on what their relationship is without having to simply put a name to it... good job :)
you know... your way of writing never fails to amaze me... i'm looking forward to reading this up to its end... this story is really worth waiting :) i love how the story slowly builds up but with purpose and not just suddenly jumping to a climax... i love how you write about the main characters' relationship. You give an idea on what their relationship is without having to simply put a name to it... good job :)
3/19/2014 c12 Fart Face
Always happy to see a new chapter of this :) I thought that June was already trying to push Will into a romantic relationship with Ian. Unless something else just dawned on her. The flashbacks were a nice peek into Ian's home life and his past with Will. It tied in nicely with the present day visit to his parents' house. Looking forward to more!
Always happy to see a new chapter of this :) I thought that June was already trying to push Will into a romantic relationship with Ian. Unless something else just dawned on her. The flashbacks were a nice peek into Ian's home life and his past with Will. It tied in nicely with the present day visit to his parents' house. Looking forward to more!
2/14/2014 c11 InsanityAndBeyond
loved this chapter.
Their interactions are just so special, and old Will is starting to come through a lot so yaaay.
I'm not entirely sure how they both feel. There's always hints of something more but they both seem to qualify it.
loved this chapter.
Their interactions are just so special, and old Will is starting to come through a lot so yaaay.
I'm not entirely sure how they both feel. There's always hints of something more but they both seem to qualify it.
2/6/2014 c11 
8K.L. Sweet
Yes! Another chapter. I love how descriptive you are, everything's so clear in my mind. Will and Ian are as awesome as ever and so is your writing. Here's to another chapter!
8K.L. SweetYes! Another chapter. I love how descriptive you are, everything's so clear in my mind. Will and Ian are as awesome as ever and so is your writing. Here's to another chapter!
2/6/2014 c11 Fart Face
I was so excited to see the update this morning! It's been hard to find stories to keep my interest here, and I've been patiently waiting for this one. Another great chapter. I like when they focus on Will and Ian, though I do like the other characters too. The 'sort of kiss' was one of the best almost kissing scenes ever. So close, and yet, so far. Poor Will is so deep in denial, I fear a lot of people are going to be hurt by the time this story is over. (not that I want it over anytime soon) Keep up the good work, and don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. This site is so fickle.
I was so excited to see the update this morning! It's been hard to find stories to keep my interest here, and I've been patiently waiting for this one. Another great chapter. I like when they focus on Will and Ian, though I do like the other characters too. The 'sort of kiss' was one of the best almost kissing scenes ever. So close, and yet, so far. Poor Will is so deep in denial, I fear a lot of people are going to be hurt by the time this story is over. (not that I want it over anytime soon) Keep up the good work, and don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. This site is so fickle.
2/6/2014 c11 Asha124
I've just passed my last exam of winter semester today and the new chapter is a perfect reward for all the hard work :-) Thanks for your outstanding writing and timing (if you posted this earlier I would have failed my exam because I just can't not read a new chapter even when I'm supposed to be studying)
I've just passed my last exam of winter semester today and the new chapter is a perfect reward for all the hard work :-) Thanks for your outstanding writing and timing (if you posted this earlier I would have failed my exam because I just can't not read a new chapter even when I'm supposed to be studying)
2/6/2014 c11 18DollyMarie
I love this story. The characters are so funny and I can't wait to see what happens next.
18DollyMarieI love this story. The characters are so funny and I can't wait to see what happens next.
1/5/2014 c10 Dark Lynnette
This is such a stellar piece of writing. I'm surprised there aren't more reviews or feedback, but I hope that doesn't stop you from continuing the story.
I love the characters and the plotting. It's also got some really hilarious moments, like the kids' conversation about fruits and vegetables.
I'm really liking the subtle moments of tenderness and affection you're showing between the main characters and can't wait to see what comes next.
Thanks!
This is such a stellar piece of writing. I'm surprised there aren't more reviews or feedback, but I hope that doesn't stop you from continuing the story.
I love the characters and the plotting. It's also got some really hilarious moments, like the kids' conversation about fruits and vegetables.
I'm really liking the subtle moments of tenderness and affection you're showing between the main characters and can't wait to see what comes next.
Thanks!