for Beginner's Friday Nights3/29/2013 c3 S.H. Marr
Yeah, I saw that one coming.
I think there's a point in the first chapter where "Ian" is called "Jason". Is there a reason for that? They really aren't similar names. Maybe something else about it was confusing.
I don't really know what to say. I really like this so far, even though it's pretty depressing in a ot of ways. I hope it ends happily, though. I like happy endings. But I'm not realy sure I'm on board with Will ending up with Ian if he has no tendencies towards bisexuality, which he doesn't seem to. Maybe you'll throw something in about that. I don't know yet.
Yeah, I saw that one coming.
I think there's a point in the first chapter where "Ian" is called "Jason". Is there a reason for that? They really aren't similar names. Maybe something else about it was confusing.
I don't really know what to say. I really like this so far, even though it's pretty depressing in a ot of ways. I hope it ends happily, though. I like happy endings. But I'm not realy sure I'm on board with Will ending up with Ian if he has no tendencies towards bisexuality, which he doesn't seem to. Maybe you'll throw something in about that. I don't know yet.