for Empty11/10/2015 c1 
12MTveit
This is a really interesting poem, I think. I've recently done some philosophy courses, and some of the idea's there are definately found in your poen as well. I think the idea of a 'soul' is so interesting, and I really like the way you've portrayed the importance of 'soul', without stating what a soul actually is. Which again is quite impossible to do. Thanks for adding it, it definately made me think!
12MTveitThis is a really interesting poem, I think. I've recently done some philosophy courses, and some of the idea's there are definately found in your poen as well. I think the idea of a 'soul' is so interesting, and I really like the way you've portrayed the importance of 'soul', without stating what a soul actually is. Which again is quite impossible to do. Thanks for adding it, it definately made me think!