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3/29/2013 c2 6Harriet Usher
This chapter made me snigger so much that my mother's giving me odd looks. And I sort of want to give Irin a hug. :P Some of the imagery in this chapter was really nice, and I loved the way you opened, with the circus act imagery.
The only slight issue I have is that I did notice a few odd spelling errors, or missing words. I think at one point you said that Irin's breath rises like the curl of a question- was it supposed to be the curl of a question mark? Otherwise it's a little confusing. These issues are minor though. Looking forward to the next one. :)
3/28/2013 c1 Harriet Usher
Heh, I really liked this. It reminds me of an idea I had a while back and never had the inclination to actually write. Celestial fantasy seems to be getting more popular of late.

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