for spring3/31/2013 c1 
6Ophelia Schmit
Aww, it's so sad! You can actually feel the person's loneliness.
-Hermie
6Ophelia SchmitAww, it's so sad! You can actually feel the person's loneliness.
-Hermie
3/31/2013 c1 12Mr. Hummingbird
It's short, and that's definitely not a bad thing, but it left me wanting more. Probably a good thing actually, considering that I'm going to check out the rest of your stuff. The spacing at the end was really what got me though. It's interesting how this sort of technique could be used in longer works. Congratulations, you've inspired me.
12Mr. HummingbirdIt's short, and that's definitely not a bad thing, but it left me wanting more. Probably a good thing actually, considering that I'm going to check out the rest of your stuff. The spacing at the end was really what got me though. It's interesting how this sort of technique could be used in longer works. Congratulations, you've inspired me.