for Ace of Spades9/18/2014 c1 
2nelso555
Wow, that was amazing, and beautifully written too. The fast paced plot held my attention from the first sentence to the last. I like the theme you've got going here (I mean, anything with zeppelins in it is going to be awesome anyway). I like the environment as well as the enticing names. Also, I was able to get quite a vivid picture of all of the characters and their actions.
Great story. I look forward to reading more of your work.
- MN
2nelso555Wow, that was amazing, and beautifully written too. The fast paced plot held my attention from the first sentence to the last. I like the theme you've got going here (I mean, anything with zeppelins in it is going to be awesome anyway). I like the environment as well as the enticing names. Also, I was able to get quite a vivid picture of all of the characters and their actions.
Great story. I look forward to reading more of your work.
- MN
4/22/2013 c2 Total Targaryen
I'm enjoying this so far! I like how we're getting a glimpse of Grace's family years after her death. Ruby seems to be struggling with her role of Queen, but not wanting to admit it to her father. This Cat guy seems an interesting character as well. Judging by the way he talks, I'd actually hazard a guess that he's a member of the upper-class. I could be wrong, though. Nevertheless, he's pretty cool.
I'm enjoying this so far! I like how we're getting a glimpse of Grace's family years after her death. Ruby seems to be struggling with her role of Queen, but not wanting to admit it to her father. This Cat guy seems an interesting character as well. Judging by the way he talks, I'd actually hazard a guess that he's a member of the upper-class. I could be wrong, though. Nevertheless, he's pretty cool.
4/22/2013 c2 11Live and learn
Amazing! I love how you pay such close attention to detail! I actually need a lot of help with that do would you mind critiquing my story extraterrestrial? I keep as lining for honest criticism but no one gives any in their reviews :/
Update soon!
I'll be waiting(:
11Live and learnAmazing! I love how you pay such close attention to detail! I actually need a lot of help with that do would you mind critiquing my story extraterrestrial? I keep as lining for honest criticism but no one gives any in their reviews :/
Update soon!
I'll be waiting(:
4/2/2013 c1 Daimexen
Oh wow! That was really intense! You have definitely captured my interest xD I can't wait to read more!
Oh wow! That was really intense! You have definitely captured my interest xD I can't wait to read more!