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4/15/2013 c1 4HollyRose2043
I love this poem; this basically describes me at the moment (although I won't graduate for another year). The only issue I have is that the word 'awake' is used twice in the same stanza. Maybe rephrase your meaning of the 3rd line differently?
Anyways, this poem sound great inside of my head, and I have no doubt it would do well as a play character's monologue or as spoken poetry. Great work :)

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