
5/19/2013 c1
3riverstardust
I like the story i derived from this poem. Its different. I disliked how from one point she is watching the girl and then it skips to the shop. The flow of kind of got disrupted there, as if it was two poems.

I like the story i derived from this poem. Its different. I disliked how from one point she is watching the girl and then it skips to the shop. The flow of kind of got disrupted there, as if it was two poems.