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4/11/2013 c1 32RiddleSolved
So I like the overall theme of this poem, you use imagery I don't see too often. What I don't like however is your complete lack of capitalized letters, or any punctuation. It makes it harder to see what belongs together. I don't mind a bit freely floating style, but a little bit of system would be nice.

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