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4/4/2014 c2 reader
HOLY FARK! So much love for this story! It is crazy amazing! I'm addicted. It feels like a sugar rush
10/25/2013 c1 Guest idk
Love this story. You're cool.
7/16/2013 c2 leavemeialone
I am glad to have clicked on this story. I think this should be an interesting story. Reading the first chapter, the rivalry between the two seems so intense. But reading on the second chapter was an interesting turn. I like how they want to be less hostile to one another in front of others. It really does seem like the years that have gone by have helped them grow. It also makes sense why they are doing this, since college is a different world for the two. But I do look forward to their feuds and I hope to see their thin line of hate being overlapped with the thin line of love. I can't wait to see what comes next.
7/9/2013 c2 fantabulousmoi
Have I ever mentioned that I LOVE AND LIVE FOR stories where the main characters hate each other?! Well, I do.

I love their hatred so much? And they've both turned hot and they're both in the same major at the same college, and Rhea forgot that hating him was a thing that she needed to do, and homeboy here doesn't want to hate; HE WANTS TO FLIRT.

I also adore their characters. Rhea's reminiscent of a southern belle, with slightly more emphasis on her newfound lack of distrust in her father when caught in a political big deal, and Ares is the very hot, very suave prepster that comes from the (better) more professional mobster family.

I LOVE IT. The dialogue was great, the scenes were great, and I can't wait for more! Love you:)
7/6/2013 c2 Alistairr
FREAKING amazing. You should be a professional writer...? You should, you should. Never seen someone write with so many details in...and not make it boring, but you pull it off. GRRRRREEEAAAT JOBB.
7/5/2013 c2 10DreamsOnlyLastForTheNight
I really like this story so far! Rhea is an awesome character to read. She's strong and smart but still naive in some ways. Definitely a refreshing character to read! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
4/14/2013 c1 fantabulousmoi
Hey chica! This story already has me hooked and waiting for more :)

It definitely has that Romeo and Juliet vibe but with more of a modern twist and aw, I already love the main characters.

I like that you haven't really talked about the other characters, because it is a story of just the two of them :)

Also, I think this is one of the first stories I've read by ff authors where I like the female lead (included in the list of girls I like is, of course, Ro Parker ;)), because there are waaaay too many stories where I like the male lead but the female character is tasteless, so I can firmly assure you that this is nottt one of them.

Can't wait for more, in whatever form or story it might be! Love you! :)

-Shweta
4/13/2013 c1 Guitarlvr
Yay! I'm so glad I can review this story, cuz I can't review any of your works on 1DFF.

I can't wait to read this story! It's a really interesting history you got going on with Rhea and Ares. I like how you started out with them disliking each other, instead of having them in love from the beginning like in Romeo and Juliet.

Good luck with this story and TR and DYTTM and all the others! :)
4/13/2013 c1 c0leyy
WHY ARE YOU NOT WRITING MORE SCREW DYTTM ((I DIDN'T MEAN THAT I DIDN'T)) JUST WRITE THIS OKAY I AM BEGGING FOR MORE WHAT THE FUCK ARES IS SO SEXY? AND RHEA YES I LOVE RHEA WRITE

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