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4/19/2013 c1 1AJ Eon
Haha, nice ending there. You really used the repetition effectively, and I liked the turning-around-of-direction in the end. Well done!
4/17/2013 c1 9MagicWords
Oh, yeah. I know the feeling. Nice to read your work again. I like how everything is just a "little bit" better concerning this person. And then the end with "a lot." It was great!
4/16/2013 c1 4mitsukozen
I like the repeating theme and feeling
4/16/2013 c1 78Elizabeth Clayton
Oh, i have sooo been there! I loved how you wrote this out, You try to be the mature one, above all of it, but at the end of the day (or poem) it's like who am i kidding shes a joke how do you not see it!? i liked how the poem developed with how often our feelings do in that regard.

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