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4/17/2013 c1 Jenny Sanders
This is such a sweet, yet sad story. I love your descriptions because they seem so elegant and made me feel as if I were actually in the coffee shop with the characters, eating pie and drinking coffee. The interaction between the characters was well written and made me wonder about their past relationship. Normally, I don't like the omniscient perspective but you handled it in a way that I actually enjoyed. A nice story overall!
4/16/2013 c1 9Penny-0-Wryter
Really sweet story and kudos for your on-point writing skill.

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