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9/16/2013 c1 cvbnjmhjkjhgfv
Whoa, angsty but very powerful. Hope things get better for you.
5/17/2013 c1 9MagicWords
Wow...this was really gripping. So much powerful emotion in this. I HATE being on the outside when the one thing you want more than anything in the world, is to be on the inside. Loved the italics with "she." Made "her" sound like a poisonous, bitter word. One of my favorites from you!
5/6/2013 c1 21Infinitely Silent
Beautifully done. I've been lucky enough to avoid that situation so far, but I bet it's tough. I could almost feel the pain you felt about watching someone you care about replace you so easily. I remembered CtrlZ while reading this one. Epic poem.
4/18/2013 c1 6RunningwithShadows
Lovely poem. It always sucks to feel like you are on the outside. It would be interesting if you continued with installments of this to see how the "character" works through her emotions and if she ever comes to a resolution. Just a thought! Happy writing!

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