4/26/2013 c2 22AFractionOfMySoul
I don't know why I didn't see this before- but I've been misisng something great.
I like the power and rhythm of this peice.
'Don't lie
don't sugarcoat
don't placate
It just makes everything worse'
Just class:)

4/18/2013 c1 AFractionOfMySoul
That was beautiful. especially the closing and opening verses. The lemming all alone really got me, something about it moved me to tears. I was thinking, maybe you should do a collection of poems around the theme of this one. It's really suit your writing style, I think.
Could you R&R my new poetry? Really shor stuff. No problem if you can't:)