
5/17/2013 c1
9MagicWords
I like the metaphor of the calm sea in this piece. It really works. Great piece, once again!

I like the metaphor of the calm sea in this piece. It really works. Great piece, once again!
4/23/2013 c1
78Elizabeth Clayton
l liked this, maybe not as much as you're other works, but i still enjoyed it's vividness and the word picture you painted, also the truth it brought about the relationship.

l liked this, maybe not as much as you're other works, but i still enjoyed it's vividness and the word picture you painted, also the truth it brought about the relationship.