for A Crime of Passion4/23/2013 c1 
78Elizabeth Clayton
this is still really good! i wouldn't fear that you were changing into a horrid monster or anything lol just feeling the jealousy and hurt of a certain muse and what has transpired, At least that's what i got from it!
78Elizabeth Claytonthis is still really good! i wouldn't fear that you were changing into a horrid monster or anything lol just feeling the jealousy and hurt of a certain muse and what has transpired, At least that's what i got from it!
4/21/2013 c1 9MagicWords
I think these are normal feelings, and you portrayed them with the right amount of emotion. Great work!
9MagicWordsI think these are normal feelings, and you portrayed them with the right amount of emotion. Great work!