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1Nori-san
It saddens me to see Abby so conflicted with the two choices he had to face. A breakdown from the main character? That's something quite fresh in a novel, hardly experimented by writers that I've read so far so kudos for feeling off that well. I really enjoyed this chapter and to reiterate, Abby's a relatable character and I can't wait to see his future development!
1Nori-sanIt saddens me to see Abby so conflicted with the two choices he had to face. A breakdown from the main character? That's something quite fresh in a novel, hardly experimented by writers that I've read so far so kudos for feeling off that well. I really enjoyed this chapter and to reiterate, Abby's a relatable character and I can't wait to see his future development!
7/28/2013 c33 Nori-san
SHOCKER! Well, at least that's what I felt for the first part until Telum's introduction so great job for that! I really love the humor you've injected into tier interactions and boy, Abby sure is one unlucky kid in this chapter.
Now for that mysterious letter, having Lycus left the hall suddenly with the incoming letter arriving at the same time...could it be related? Or perhaps you're trying to lead us for a plot twist! I guess I'm thinking too much but I really liked the latest update.
Keep it up as always and I'm looking forward to your next!
SHOCKER! Well, at least that's what I felt for the first part until Telum's introduction so great job for that! I really love the humor you've injected into tier interactions and boy, Abby sure is one unlucky kid in this chapter.
Now for that mysterious letter, having Lycus left the hall suddenly with the incoming letter arriving at the same time...could it be related? Or perhaps you're trying to lead us for a plot twist! I guess I'm thinking too much but I really liked the latest update.
Keep it up as always and I'm looking forward to your next!
7/23/2013 c32 Nori-san
Finally caught up with your latest addition! Shocker, Onuris past is now properly revealed! Now you got me thinking whether which side of the chess does Onuris belongs and that aside, the answers to the Soul Shifter will finally be answered! Can't wait for your next update!
Finally caught up with your latest addition! Shocker, Onuris past is now properly revealed! Now you got me thinking whether which side of the chess does Onuris belongs and that aside, the answers to the Soul Shifter will finally be answered! Can't wait for your next update!
7/23/2013 c30 Nori-san
Hah! My hair stands as Abby finally morphs into a werewolf! I can visualize everything beautifully in my head and go Lycus my waffle werewolf! Great job in heating things up to this moment and judging from Abby's description, it seems that his ability falls around the use of cards eh?
As to answer your question regarding Recreo, his past is definitely something new to me, seeing that there's a rather big contrast between his soft past self and the present cynical and mysterious being. Well, nonetheless he's still my favorite lead cast and I just can't wait to see the past events that had him walk down such path.
Great job as always and keep it up!
Hah! My hair stands as Abby finally morphs into a werewolf! I can visualize everything beautifully in my head and go Lycus my waffle werewolf! Great job in heating things up to this moment and judging from Abby's description, it seems that his ability falls around the use of cards eh?
As to answer your question regarding Recreo, his past is definitely something new to me, seeing that there's a rather big contrast between his soft past self and the present cynical and mysterious being. Well, nonetheless he's still my favorite lead cast and I just can't wait to see the past events that had him walk down such path.
Great job as always and keep it up!
7/23/2013 c29 Nori-san
For the love of god I can't stop reading through your chapters! Whenever I choose to take a break and there you go introducing another interesting element into the play! It's Recreo's appearance right after Chasm had his fill with Rasant!
I can't believe that Glaice would be so heartless as to kill off his grandson, poor Abby..and I wonder where's Lycus? Pardon me while I head on to the next page to welcome my idol of this entire play hahaha.
For the love of god I can't stop reading through your chapters! Whenever I choose to take a break and there you go introducing another interesting element into the play! It's Recreo's appearance right after Chasm had his fill with Rasant!
I can't believe that Glaice would be so heartless as to kill off his grandson, poor Abby..and I wonder where's Lycus? Pardon me while I head on to the next page to welcome my idol of this entire play hahaha.
7/23/2013 c28 Nori-san
I wanted to say this in the previous chapter, but I kinda forgot. Chasm's kind of quiet compared to the other two. I wonder why? And now that Onuris has shed light on Rimor's past, I was really surprised that they're brothers! What? *Calms myself* and Rimor is still an irritating fellow in the past and I stand my ground that I still dislike him.
Never had I thought that a werewolf like Divum is able to wield technology like the cellphone he had! Well now, everything's going swell and the next chapter brings Abby back to his family! I wonder what surprises is in store now...great job again!
I wanted to say this in the previous chapter, but I kinda forgot. Chasm's kind of quiet compared to the other two. I wonder why? And now that Onuris has shed light on Rimor's past, I was really surprised that they're brothers! What? *Calms myself* and Rimor is still an irritating fellow in the past and I stand my ground that I still dislike him.
Never had I thought that a werewolf like Divum is able to wield technology like the cellphone he had! Well now, everything's going swell and the next chapter brings Abby back to his family! I wonder what surprises is in store now...great job again!
7/23/2013 c27 Nori-san
Another interesting chapter that sheds more information and development between the souls, the human Abby and Divum. I can't help but laugh when Abby turned all weak and vulnerable, thinking up about 'that' sort of thing between a werewolf and human! Had a great laugh and your descriptions, they are as spot on as ever! The paintings you've drawn for us are always something I enjoy and value a lot in your work. Keep it up!
Another interesting chapter that sheds more information and development between the souls, the human Abby and Divum. I can't help but laugh when Abby turned all weak and vulnerable, thinking up about 'that' sort of thing between a werewolf and human! Had a great laugh and your descriptions, they are as spot on as ever! The paintings you've drawn for us are always something I enjoy and value a lot in your work. Keep it up!
7/22/2013 c26 Nori-san
The past between Recreo and Divum is slowly revealing themselves as the recollections keeps being pushed forcibly into Abby's head! This wasn't really what I expected and it's in a good way, not to worry! This makes me kind of think Recreo in a new light and it's saddening when I read the last part...a regret perhaps?
Good job thus far and I really never would have imagined how Abby could have lived with three different entities stuck in his head! Kind of feel bad for him since he's just a vessel for others, as much as he is himself.
The past between Recreo and Divum is slowly revealing themselves as the recollections keeps being pushed forcibly into Abby's head! This wasn't really what I expected and it's in a good way, not to worry! This makes me kind of think Recreo in a new light and it's saddening when I read the last part...a regret perhaps?
Good job thus far and I really never would have imagined how Abby could have lived with three different entities stuck in his head! Kind of feel bad for him since he's just a vessel for others, as much as he is himself.
7/21/2013 c24 1Nori-san
I apologize for not reviewing for the previous chapters but it's just that your story just keeps me wanting to go to the next chapter! Truth be told, I would have proceeded to the next chapter if I hadn't thought about dropping a review :x
Abby is really lost about all these, isn't he? I would have wet my pants and term myself insane if I'm in his shoes. Not mourning for the dead but rather celebrate over their corpse, butler and fiancée going mad with all that running away from the pursuer sand Divum! He's back with a greater thirst for vengeance!
It was nice to introduce the Cain council here and nothing's too rush too and now if you excuse me, I'll be going to the next chapter! All in all, the writing's as expected of you and like always, you've never failed to impress me!
1Nori-sanI apologize for not reviewing for the previous chapters but it's just that your story just keeps me wanting to go to the next chapter! Truth be told, I would have proceeded to the next chapter if I hadn't thought about dropping a review :x
Abby is really lost about all these, isn't he? I would have wet my pants and term myself insane if I'm in his shoes. Not mourning for the dead but rather celebrate over their corpse, butler and fiancée going mad with all that running away from the pursuer sand Divum! He's back with a greater thirst for vengeance!
It was nice to introduce the Cain council here and nothing's too rush too and now if you excuse me, I'll be going to the next chapter! All in all, the writing's as expected of you and like always, you've never failed to impress me!
7/20/2013 c31 InfiniteMaze
As always, an excellent chapter. I love where he story is headed, very I intense. And with chasm, recreo, and cane and Abby- gahh I love it. Update soon
As always, an excellent chapter. I love where he story is headed, very I intense. And with chasm, recreo, and cane and Abby- gahh I love it. Update soon
7/16/2013 c20 Nori-san
Lycus, the character that I'll definitely love over Cane for now. Such eccentric behavior and 'innocence', ahh its something I tend to like regarding characters (in manga context of course) ...and waffles. It just gets me laughing every time.
Anyway, it's a refreshing read seeing that you've completely changed your way of perspective. It breaks away from the solemn and tragic chapter prior to this, and the lightheartedness and humor in this sort of separates the two parts rather distinctively. Great job for that. And it seems that the Cautes family was living a rather 'human' life now and I wonder how will Abby fare in the trials to come. And so the tale continues.
Lycus, the character that I'll definitely love over Cane for now. Such eccentric behavior and 'innocence', ahh its something I tend to like regarding characters (in manga context of course) ...and waffles. It just gets me laughing every time.
Anyway, it's a refreshing read seeing that you've completely changed your way of perspective. It breaks away from the solemn and tragic chapter prior to this, and the lightheartedness and humor in this sort of separates the two parts rather distinctively. Great job for that. And it seems that the Cautes family was living a rather 'human' life now and I wonder how will Abby fare in the trials to come. And so the tale continues.
7/15/2013 c19 Nori-san
Honestly, you've succeeded in making me shed a tear. It goes to show just how many talented writers are out there, undiscovered in the world. I'm glad that I've read your story and it has truly left a deep impression in my heart. It was heartbreaking to see the death of a character we've been following closely for mostly the entire part and for Cane, it's much much worse. As promised, I've finally read to the end of part 1 and I can't wait to pick up the next part! Really great job so far and your writing has been an inspiration to me, a motivation for me to buck up on my writing as well!
Honestly, you've succeeded in making me shed a tear. It goes to show just how many talented writers are out there, undiscovered in the world. I'm glad that I've read your story and it has truly left a deep impression in my heart. It was heartbreaking to see the death of a character we've been following closely for mostly the entire part and for Cane, it's much much worse. As promised, I've finally read to the end of part 1 and I can't wait to pick up the next part! Really great job so far and your writing has been an inspiration to me, a motivation for me to buck up on my writing as well!
7/15/2013 c17 Nori-san
Woah woah woah...what?!
I have to apologize for taking such a long time to read this chapter but I really have to give you credit for masterfully pulling and playing with the strings of fate between the many different casts, all acting above the same platform, under the same stretch of sky. The (silent) confessions between the two was really touching to read and if only they had let the other know, perhaps it won't have to be this way after all. Creo finally falls with the true perpetrator finally revealing himself. Darn I initially thought it was him but scratched it away when I read that Creo confessed the sins. But who knew? Kudos for that!
Woah woah woah...what?!
I have to apologize for taking such a long time to read this chapter but I really have to give you credit for masterfully pulling and playing with the strings of fate between the many different casts, all acting above the same platform, under the same stretch of sky. The (silent) confessions between the two was really touching to read and if only they had let the other know, perhaps it won't have to be this way after all. Creo finally falls with the true perpetrator finally revealing himself. Darn I initially thought it was him but scratched it away when I read that Creo confessed the sins. But who knew? Kudos for that!