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1Du
Awww, this was so sweet! I really enjoyed this story. It was simple, yet good. There was so much tension through it all! This last chapter was maybe a bit rushed, or I think an epilogue would have been nice. But overall it was great, very well written! I'm off to read something else of yours :)
1DuAwww, this was so sweet! I really enjoyed this story. It was simple, yet good. There was so much tension through it all! This last chapter was maybe a bit rushed, or I think an epilogue would have been nice. But overall it was great, very well written! I'm off to read something else of yours :)
5/17/2015 c25 Guest
Good story overall, but the ending seems a little abrupt.
Good story overall, but the ending seems a little abrupt.
10/26/2013 c25 2renegade01
Cool story. Only criticism I have is that it seems a bit rushed the further along you get :-)
2renegade01Cool story. Only criticism I have is that it seems a bit rushed the further along you get :-)
10/26/2013 c7 renegade01
I can't believe you have so few reviews. I'm loving everything you've written so far. U sure do love building up tension;-)
I can't believe you have so few reviews. I'm loving everything you've written so far. U sure do love building up tension;-)
10/21/2013 c1 Tyana Barnes
YES! Gawd,do you know how hard it is to find a good romance story that's not slash on here?
YES! Gawd,do you know how hard it is to find a good romance story that's not slash on here?
5/15/2013 c25 Guest
Oh, this was a lovely story! Definitely one of those feel-good stories that you need after a long, hard day. I just loved Sam-the mix between the wild type, but down-to-earth. You have him so perfectly balanced that he's actually very believable. Most only throw in the arrogance and recklessness and expect us to fall in love once they become all of a sudden kind because they're in love-name it pussy-whipped. But you didn't do that.
Great job writing this! Definitely going to read more of your work soon!
-Charlotte Isla
Oh, this was a lovely story! Definitely one of those feel-good stories that you need after a long, hard day. I just loved Sam-the mix between the wild type, but down-to-earth. You have him so perfectly balanced that he's actually very believable. Most only throw in the arrogance and recklessness and expect us to fall in love once they become all of a sudden kind because they're in love-name it pussy-whipped. But you didn't do that.
Great job writing this! Definitely going to read more of your work soon!
-Charlotte Isla
4/23/2013 c25 Rushed
I loved the idea of the story... but the whole thing was rushed. The chapters were short and you didn't spend much time during actual moments of the story. It was enjoyable to read... but it was rushed and there honestly wasn't much to the story besides that. You should definitely rewrite the story though ) I'd love to read it again. It would be awesome if you could add more to the story. Make the chapters longer, make every moment memorable, make it personal. I want to feel like I'm actually the characters in the story.
I loved the idea of the story... but the whole thing was rushed. The chapters were short and you didn't spend much time during actual moments of the story. It was enjoyable to read... but it was rushed and there honestly wasn't much to the story besides that. You should definitely rewrite the story though ) I'd love to read it again. It would be awesome if you could add more to the story. Make the chapters longer, make every moment memorable, make it personal. I want to feel like I'm actually the characters in the story.
4/21/2013 c25 Joesette
That was a very sweet story. If only there was an epilogue for this I think you would make my tomorrow. That bar holds so much to the characters hold, that without it, they would have nothing to start up a conversation at...
That was a very sweet story. If only there was an epilogue for this I think you would make my tomorrow. That bar holds so much to the characters hold, that without it, they would have nothing to start up a conversation at...
4/21/2013 c3 Joesette
I might not review for a couple of chapters at a time b/c, well, when I get into a story, I get INTO a story and forget everything except the story itself. So please don't hate me.
I might not review for a couple of chapters at a time b/c, well, when I get into a story, I get INTO a story and forget everything except the story itself. So please don't hate me.
4/21/2013 c2 Joesette
I haven't even made it to chapter three and I can't help but laugh through my tears! It's getting harder to breath! Oh god, I need to calm down... Ok. Serious face on. You might not think this is THAT funny but I absolutely adore awkward moments! There the best things in life and you play them very well.
I haven't even made it to chapter three and I can't help but laugh through my tears! It's getting harder to breath! Oh god, I need to calm down... Ok. Serious face on. You might not think this is THAT funny but I absolutely adore awkward moments! There the best things in life and you play them very well.