3/13/2015 c1 Alyssa
Really nice poem. Gave me an idea for mine. Thank u

4/24/2013 c1 3ZeeZe101
I loved the alphabetical style!
I didn't notice it until the end, when it started to get a little awkward.
The x and z are a little forced.
The line "X-ray my heard and"..did you mean to write "head"?

Overall though, that was so cute(: