for The Unknown3/23/2014 c4 snccrockz
its been a while since i've read your stories, and now your married lol i need to catch up. anyways, hope to see this updated when you have time. i like the plot.
its been a while since i've read your stories, and now your married lol i need to catch up. anyways, hope to see this updated when you have time. i like the plot.
11/9/2013 c1 Katie
Will you ever update "My Beloved"?
Will you ever update "My Beloved"?
7/7/2013 c4 
17Avra-Sha Faohla
I'm intrigued and looking forward to reading more! Please do keep writing. I'm really enjoying this.
17Avra-Sha FaohlaI'm intrigued and looking forward to reading more! Please do keep writing. I'm really enjoying this.
6/16/2013 c4 Samantha Cotton
Please, please, please keep writing! I am hooked!
Please, please, please keep writing! I am hooked!
6/15/2013 c4 2renegade01
Aww this was pretty emotional. I like how Jack is trying not to feel anything ;-)
2renegade01Aww this was pretty emotional. I like how Jack is trying not to feel anything ;-)
6/13/2013 c4 1funnechick
Wow...he took that better than I thought he would. But she's right, what is she going to tell her mother...and father? And I wondered if she was going to tell him about her brother. I'm glad he knows; hopefully that makes him understand her situation a little better.
No way is he going to be able to make it through this trip back home with her without beginning to like her, sober. :)
1funnechickWow...he took that better than I thought he would. But she's right, what is she going to tell her mother...and father? And I wondered if she was going to tell him about her brother. I'm glad he knows; hopefully that makes him understand her situation a little better.
No way is he going to be able to make it through this trip back home with her without beginning to like her, sober. :)
6/13/2013 c1 3Arianna Flemming
Hello:) just wanted to say: loving this story of yours just stumbled upon it and loving Avery sec of it please more:) congrats on marriage:)
3Arianna FlemmingHello:) just wanted to say: loving this story of yours just stumbled upon it and loving Avery sec of it please more:) congrats on marriage:)
5/3/2013 c3 2renegade01
she ran off! awesome ;) Jack's gonna be like of all the chicks to get stuck with... ;)
2renegade01she ran off! awesome ;) Jack's gonna be like of all the chicks to get stuck with... ;)
5/2/2013 c3 Littlechin
First off I'm so excited that you're writing again! It was always such a pleasure to read your writing. So far i think this story is interesting, taking a lightly different spin off of the usual "we accidentally fell in bed together and got married". There is a lack of trying and panic on both ends. More of acceptance, but one is acceptance of change the other of wrong. I love how Adina has this internal conflict that you're exposing. Hope to see a update soon!
First off I'm so excited that you're writing again! It was always such a pleasure to read your writing. So far i think this story is interesting, taking a lightly different spin off of the usual "we accidentally fell in bed together and got married". There is a lack of trying and panic on both ends. More of acceptance, but one is acceptance of change the other of wrong. I love how Adina has this internal conflict that you're exposing. Hope to see a update soon!
4/25/2013 c2 renegade01
hehe interesting beginning. its sad because of her brother's death but this chapter also made me grin so nice balance ;)
hehe interesting beginning. its sad because of her brother's death but this chapter also made me grin so nice balance ;)
4/23/2013 c1 30Jainblu
Hello Kristina,
I'm so glad to see you return to writing :)
I just wanted to point out what I reckon is a typo. It's in the sentence beginning "Yet, as she let my attention fade from him to the little diamond..." I think that 'my' should be a her. ;)
Anyway, welcome back !
Xxxxxx
30JainbluHello Kristina,
I'm so glad to see you return to writing :)
I just wanted to point out what I reckon is a typo. It's in the sentence beginning "Yet, as she let my attention fade from him to the little diamond..." I think that 'my' should be a her. ;)
Anyway, welcome back !
Xxxxxx
4/22/2013 c2 Kelly-Green
Wee! New story! I want to know about this stranger, who you haven't even given us a name for yet. I kinda wish we had the crazy drunken marriage to read but I think falling in love after they've fallen together will be a more interesting story. I'm looking forward to their personalities clashing. Adina sounds like she's going to be honest and mad and herself, family values and all which will be a fun foil for the stereotypical bad boy. Unless this is about her becoming more wild and letting go of her roots, in which case that's like five cliches too many P Post more soon please?
Wee! New story! I want to know about this stranger, who you haven't even given us a name for yet. I kinda wish we had the crazy drunken marriage to read but I think falling in love after they've fallen together will be a more interesting story. I'm looking forward to their personalities clashing. Adina sounds like she's going to be honest and mad and herself, family values and all which will be a fun foil for the stereotypical bad boy. Unless this is about her becoming more wild and letting go of her roots, in which case that's like five cliches too many P Post more soon please?