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4/22/2013 c1 2dcflag
I really loved the metaphors you used. I found it really imaginative and the contrasts between the princess and the business man were brilliant, especially the contrast in the colours between them. I can't see any underlined part but that doesn't really bother me to be honest.

I also really liked the premise of the short, it's really intriguing and doesn't give too much away about the whys and the reasons of the suns quick entrance and exit. I'm glad you didn't go into explaining it all.

Definately a favourite of mine. Thanks for sharing.

I'd love to know what you class/teacher thought of this.

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