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Do you visit Wikia/Fandom? If you do how about you visit Wiki like the Love Interest Wikia, Shipping Wikia, The Fanon Shipping Wikia etc? Wikia is also called Wiki due to Wikia is a Wiki like Wikipedia is a Wiki. You can do thing for it like make gifs, add images to categories, create pages etc. make sure you read the rules if they have any.
12/10/2022 c13 Otakuami
Omg I was rooting for Dominic for a bit since he has the whole enemies to lovers trope towards Christina but turned out to be such a huge ass! I am going back to Mark now who's probably the best boy for both for her personalities.
Omg I was rooting for Dominic for a bit since he has the whole enemies to lovers trope towards Christina but turned out to be such a huge ass! I am going back to Mark now who's probably the best boy for both for her personalities.
7/1/2022 c3 
16Bookwormgirl64
Okay, I'm definitely gonna have to check out the rest of the story at some point - this was amazing!
16Bookwormgirl64Okay, I'm definitely gonna have to check out the rest of the story at some point - this was amazing!
6/19/2015 c18 K.Kiara93
You deserve so much more credit. I don't think I've ever wanted to re-read a story more. I may even be in love the story and the way Christina finds herself (just what I thought happened).
Your writing is amazing!
You deserve so much more credit. I don't think I've ever wanted to re-read a story more. I may even be in love the story and the way Christina finds herself (just what I thought happened).
Your writing is amazing!
2/13/2014 c18 6Deeper than Fathomless
I read this entire story this morning...yeah, I'm a loser. lol
Whenever You Want is a wonderful story! The plot is similar to Rose Red - you know, a relationship that does have an easy one-way route because of misconceptions. It's creative, and the relationship is balanced. Your characters have distinct personalities that are likeable (and sometimes unlikeable, which is normal) and a voice. I love how both stories have woman who aren't whiney and weak, and the man isn't a bossy d-bag. Their relationship is realistic, but it ends with a satisfying happily ever after.
I have also noticed that you develop your paragraphs well. I have trouble with that in writing.
This story is written beautifully, has a great plot, the characters are well developed and it's realistically satisfying. Well done!
6Deeper than FathomlessI read this entire story this morning...yeah, I'm a loser. lol
Whenever You Want is a wonderful story! The plot is similar to Rose Red - you know, a relationship that does have an easy one-way route because of misconceptions. It's creative, and the relationship is balanced. Your characters have distinct personalities that are likeable (and sometimes unlikeable, which is normal) and a voice. I love how both stories have woman who aren't whiney and weak, and the man isn't a bossy d-bag. Their relationship is realistic, but it ends with a satisfying happily ever after.
I have also noticed that you develop your paragraphs well. I have trouble with that in writing.
This story is written beautifully, has a great plot, the characters are well developed and it's realistically satisfying. Well done!
9/9/2013 c8 bettyboop1124
This is a fantastic story! There is nothing that I love more than a believably strong female character. They are a rare find. I will certainly be checking out your other writings.
This is a fantastic story! There is nothing that I love more than a believably strong female character. They are a rare find. I will certainly be checking out your other writings.
9/3/2013 c18 3TheClosetWriter16
Aww love this story so much! Just spent an hour reading it... at least... And I have a huge test tomorrow :O
3TheClosetWriter16Aww love this story so much! Just spent an hour reading it... at least... And I have a huge test tomorrow :O
9/2/2013 c14 Secrets
Oh thank god she doesnt like Mark...at least I hope she doesn't, cuz that would just plain suck. I like mini(dominique) better anyways.
Oh thank god she doesnt like Mark...at least I hope she doesn't, cuz that would just plain suck. I like mini(dominique) better anyways.
8/29/2013 c18 augmentedDREAMS
Aww... That was lovely.
I've had a great time reading this novel and honestly, I'm going to miss it incredibly. I hope you make a sequel. LOL.
BTW, I'm definitely going to read Rose Red! I can't wait for next Thursday!
Aww... That was lovely.
I've had a great time reading this novel and honestly, I'm going to miss it incredibly. I hope you make a sequel. LOL.
BTW, I'm definitely going to read Rose Red! I can't wait for next Thursday!
8/29/2013 c18 smrae
Great ending! Loved hearing all about Dominic's dirty like secrets! Looking forward to reading more of your work. You are a wonderful writer and I really enjoy your style. It's real and believable so keep doing what you're doing!
Great ending! Loved hearing all about Dominic's dirty like secrets! Looking forward to reading more of your work. You are a wonderful writer and I really enjoy your style. It's real and believable so keep doing what you're doing!
8/29/2013 c17 smrae
Sorry this review is a little late! Loved this chapter! You did a great job developing the relationship for Christina and Mark into something that is very believable and real. I'm glad they got everything off their chest. They came clean and everything worked out. Plus Trevor and Mindy's relationship was a bonus! Great chapter can't wait for the next!
Sorry this review is a little late! Loved this chapter! You did a great job developing the relationship for Christina and Mark into something that is very believable and real. I'm glad they got everything off their chest. They came clean and everything worked out. Plus Trevor and Mindy's relationship was a bonus! Great chapter can't wait for the next!
8/22/2013 c17 1leavesfallingup
Breaking up is hard to do. Obviously they're a little confused; it doesn't seem like they understand the how-to's in this process.
Good for them. Now send the male escorts home.
1leavesfallingupBreaking up is hard to do. Obviously they're a little confused; it doesn't seem like they understand the how-to's in this process.
Good for them. Now send the male escorts home.
8/16/2013 c16 leavesfallingup
Interruptions again? We need a picture of Christina/Tina before/after. She seems to be a pretty amazing woman if men keep falling apart over her.
Interruptions again? We need a picture of Christina/Tina before/after. She seems to be a pretty amazing woman if men keep falling apart over her.