for Alexandria2/29/2016 c5 
8Ibbonray
This is possibly the weirdest thing I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Odd. Brilliant, though, just brilliant. The beginning seemed broken, since I was unused to the style at the time, but ending unraveled a lovely mystery and I felt fulfilled.
Things of note: Chapter 2- the Unhappiness Factor- caught that one! :) I really loved your incorporation of the Tempest and Kaspar's comparison to Ariel. Using the library of Alexandria as a sort of mind maze was also brilliant. Reality and fiction were so interwoven that I felt no compassion for any of the characters (except for maybe Kaspar)... but I felt such a connection to the story itself. Fiction became an almost futuristic reality.
Thank you so much for this. I'm very impressed. Best wishes
8IbbonrayThis is possibly the weirdest thing I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Odd. Brilliant, though, just brilliant. The beginning seemed broken, since I was unused to the style at the time, but ending unraveled a lovely mystery and I felt fulfilled.
Things of note: Chapter 2- the Unhappiness Factor- caught that one! :) I really loved your incorporation of the Tempest and Kaspar's comparison to Ariel. Using the library of Alexandria as a sort of mind maze was also brilliant. Reality and fiction were so interwoven that I felt no compassion for any of the characters (except for maybe Kaspar)... but I felt such a connection to the story itself. Fiction became an almost futuristic reality.
Thank you so much for this. I'm very impressed. Best wishes